Presentation QA Limericks 004: Read-First Review of 14 Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00071.limericks-004 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/limericks/ — the 14 records assigned by workload issue #670 (LIM-LLG-0020-COMA19-PBC, LIM-LLG-0027-B, LIM-LLG-0040-C, LIM-LLG-0051-E, LIM-LLG-0052-MFX, LIM-LLG-0072-SOMA, LIM-LLG-0088-B, LIM-LLG-0103-COMA, LIM-LLG-0114-SOMA, LIM-LLG-0115-TNS, LIM-LLG-0217-CNTR, LIM-LLG-0218-FSD, LIM-LLG-0220-UIS, LIM-LLG-0223-EFA)

What changed

  • Read all 14 assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including residue verse clusters.
  • LIM-LLG-0072-SOMA.md line 91: added one blank line so the gap before the "mandate to rest" stanza matches the record's own three-blank stanza separation used everywhere else in the file. Whitespace only; no words, markers, indentation, or hard breaks touched.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, tags, titles, stanza order, verse text, indentation, and two-space hard breaks. Verse bodies are protected; no emphasis was added anywhere.
  • Existing emphasis, including the bolded pivot lines already present in LIM-LLG-0052-MFX.md (line 88), LIM-LLG-0115-TNS.md (line 88), LIM-LLG-0217-CNTR.md (line 72), LIM-LLG-0218-FSD.md (line 48), LIM-LLG-0220-UIS.md (line 63), and LIM-LLG-0223-EFA.md (line 88). Not copied to neighbors, per the issue's instruction.
  • LIM-LLG-0020-COMA19-PBC.md: the three-space indented couplets at lines 94–95, 102–103, 110–111, and 118–119 are consistent across all four final stanzas and read as a deliberate daemon-voice device, not residue to flatten.
  • LIM-LLG-0027-B.md: register swings ("Jesus, enough," "self-licking reforms") are the record's voice.
  • Grammar and quote-style anomalies inside protected verse were flagged as needs decision, not fixed — see below.

Verification performed

  • BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed before and after the edit.
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after recount.
  • git diff on assigned records confirms a single added blank line and nothing else.
  • Cross-checked assigned files against snapshot commit 8997eebe; the only intervening change is the archive-wide verse hard-break restoration (PR #824), which this review preserved.

Unresolved follow-up

  • LIM-LLG-0114-SOMA.md line 95: "And it haven't finished yet," — grammar anomaly inside protected verse. Needs decision.
  • LIM-LLG-0115-TNS.md line 94: curly apostrophe in "It’s a palette for pain," — the only curly quote in the assigned set, inside protected verse. Needs decision.
  • LIM-LLG-0217-CNTR.md line 78: "But C.U.N.T.I.E.R.' bliss" — truncated possessive, inside protected verse. Needs decision.