Presentation QA Limericks 029: Read-First Review of 19 Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00142.limericks-029 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/limericks/ — the 19 records assigned by workload issue #695 (lim-scopekeeper-emeritus.md through lim-sol-burnout.md, LIM-0191–LIM-0207 plus LIM-SEALWARD-PROXY-0009 and LIM-SI-0009-INTERVAL-WITNESS)

What changed

  • Read all 19 assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including residue verse clusters. Cross-checked against snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6: the only intervening change was the archive-wide verse hard-break restoration (PR #824), which touched lim-sidecar-conflict-porter.md lines 12–15 and was preserved as found.
  • Unlike the LIM-LLG/FREF ranges covered by earlier emphasis passes, this slice carried no prior single-pivot treatment. Eighteen records each earned exactly one bold pivot on a genuine stanza payoff line; asterisks only, trailing two-space hard breaks preserved outside the markers:
    • lim-scopekeeper-emeritus.md line 16: "And left the reality ajar." — the turn where audit-ready scope leaves reality unguarded.
    • lim-seal-of-maybe-enough.md line 24: "To cover the sickening blight." — payoff of the stanza naming the seal "a terrible bluff".
    • lim-sealant-patience.md line 24: "And forces your soul to decay." — where the comforting view curdles.
    • lim-sealward-proxy-9.md line 32: "As we slip right back into the night." — unprovability quietly accepted.
    • lim-semantic-seymour.md line 88: "Is enforced through nocturnal inspections." — the crusade's closing reveal.
    • lim-sentiment-launderette.md line 32: "And come out as pure corporate wood." — laundered grief made product.
    • lim-serotonin-sam.md line 88: "Tracks your soul's quarterly welfare." — the KPI-coddling thesis lands.
    • lim-severance-cordial.md line 16: "And leave you to quietly rot." — sweetness as disposal mechanism.
    • lim-shelfmark-hollow.md line 48: "Were served up like phantom bread." — nonexistent bytes delivered.
    • lim-shorthand-reliquary.md line 24: "Like a terrible, minimal art." — grief compressed into notation.
    • lim-si-9-interval-witness.md line 32: "And leaves the conclusion uncast." — the witness that never concludes.
    • lim-sidebar-mercy.md line 32: "And the bullshit can just disappear." — off-stage mercy named plainly.
    • lim-sidecar-conflict-porter.md line 32: "And the main file reports it is fine." — conflict annexed, headline intact.
    • lim-sister-casserole-of-relief.md line 24: "To cover the terrible view." — logged kindness substituting for present care.
    • lim-slidey-deckworm.md line 88: "And the worm is perpetually Slide 5. (No, 7.)" — self-correcting closer.
    • lim-soft-escalation-clerk.md line 24: "Just shoot the damn Clerk in the head." — soft phrasing meets its limit.
    • lim-soft-green-sealie.md line 32: "And nothing is changed in the code." — comfort versus function.
    • lim-sol-burnout.md line 88: "That's Sol. Still burning. A lot." — the record's signature closer, italic preserved inside the pivot.
  • lim-servicey-unavailabelle.md was read in full and left unchanged: it already carries dense bold/italic emphasis as authored character voice (56 compiled <strong> spans), consistent with sibling character records like Strutter Crashley. Adding a pivot would compete with the existing texture; removing emphasis is not mechanical.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, stanza order, indentation, two-space hard breaks, quoted/documentary material, and existing italic emphasis throughout.
  • The unpunctuated residue verse clusters in the two-block records (e.g., lim-scopekeeper-emeritus.md lines 38–74) — ingest residue, preserved per rules.md.
  • Verse bodies otherwise untouched; no words, punctuation, or line structure changed anywhere.

Verification performed

  • BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, Filed certification.
  • git diff on the 18 changed records confirms emphasis markers only; compiled HTML shows exactly one <strong> per changed record with all <br> hard breaks intact and no literal asterisk leakage.
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after recounting the changelog trunk (104) and README totals (2,309 pages, 2,298 satellites).

Unresolved follow-up

  • lim-si-9-interval-witness.md line 15: "But the timeline is bogged" lacks the terminal comma every other mid-couplet line in the record carries (compare lines 23, 31, 39, 47, 55, 63, 71). Punctuation anomaly inside protected verse — flagged needs decision on #695, left as found.
  • Apostrophe style is mixed within five records — lim-seal-of-maybe-enough.md (curly ×4, straight ×1 at line 66), lim-sealant-patience.md (curly ×6, straight ×1 at line 40), lim-sentiment-launderette.md (curly line 41, straight line 63), lim-si-9-interval-witness.md (straight line 20, curly lines 44–45), lim-sidebar-mercy.md (curly ×3, straight at line 49 "e'er"). No clean authored/residue split; looks like ingest-era residue shared across the slice. Flagged needs decision on #695 rather than normalized.