Presentation QA Lorelog 001: Read-First Review of 5 Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00064.lorelog-001 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the 5 records assigned by workload issue #699 (DS-404-ALPHA, LLG-0001-NAV, LLG-0002-CED, LLG-0003-SVR, LLG-0004-SMD)

What changed

• Read all 5 assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including residue appendices.
• LLG-0001-NAV.md line 16: bolded the clause "the collapse may have been intentional" — the record's pivot, where the incident report flips from unresolved failure to contested intentionality. Asterisks only.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, tags, titles, relations, quoted/documentary material, residue-section spacing, verse hard breaks, and explicit heading anchors ({#...}).
• DS-404-ALPHA.md: already carries earned emphasis (**DS-404-ALPHA**, field labels, **73 days late**, **compliance vacuum**); no further pivot justified. The :::note/::: fences at lines 88/94 render as literal text — flagged as needs decision (see below), not edited.
• LLG-0002-CED.md: Ursula's testimony at line 16 already carries the pivot inside quotation; flat delivery is the record's voice.
• LLG-0003-SVR.md: procedural cadence (09:14/09:17/09:22) carries the record; preserved the unexplained seventeen-entries/three-fields residue.
• LLG-0004-SMD.md: --- separators and the audit triplet ("No broken links / No missing pages / No correct outcomes") already supply rhythm; trailing spaces on lines 28–30 are residue whitespace, left per the no-whitespace-cleaner rule.
• The unbroken residue verse clusters in DS-404-ALPHA.md (lines 83–86 stamp quatrain, 95–99 desk-lamp limerick) were left exactly as authored; verse hard breaks are protected post-#824.

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed before and after the edit.
• git diff confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, or whitespace changes.
• Compiled-article inspection of dist/cantilever/lorelog/LLG-0001-NAV.html and unchanged neighbor DS-0404-ALPHA.html.
• Cross-checked the snapshot commit 8997eebe; all 5 assigned files are unchanged since the snapshot.

Unresolved follow-up

• :::note fences render as literal paragraphs archive-wide (~29 files carry ~58 fence lines, e.g. DS-404-ALPHA.md, mascots/938, reference/fref-*). Boris's component contract supports <Aside kind="note"> only; the :::kind form was an export representation removed as non-round-trippable input. The 2026-08 conversion (commit ee4768f3) assumed :::note compiled to a styled component — it never did. Whether to restore <Aside> wrappers or accept the literal fences as residue needs a maintainer decision spanning the corpus, not this record.