Presentation QA Lorelog 003: Read-First Review of Six Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00145.lorelog-003 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the six records assigned by workload issue #701 (LLG-0040-C, LLG-0051-E, LLG-0052-MFX, LLG-0072-SOMA, LLG-0088-B, LLG-0103-COMA)

What changed

• Read all six assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including all related-residue sections.
• Intervening-diff disclosure: since snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6, all six records had two-space hard breaks appended to the trailing audit-residue limerick stanzas (#824-era work). Current files were reviewed and edited, not the snapshot; no other changes intervened.
• LLG-0040-C.md line 20: bolded "an interpretation that has not yet been written down anywhere except this case file." — the closing clause where the Council's workaround survives only inside this record. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0051-E.md line 20: bolded "a one-time waiver for feelings about feelings" — the pivot where recursion becomes a waiver product. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0088-B.md line 38: bolded "The host did not." — the tripartite reversal where protocol success meets presenter casualty. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0103-COMA.md line 18: bolded "the appearance of uninterrupted activity" — the audit's landing: the only harm was cosmetic. Asterisks only.
• Recounted content/changelog/ source records, including this docket, and set the trunk's Count: accordingly. README totals updated to match source.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, stanza structure, indentation, two-space hard breaks, list structure, quoted/documentary material, and existing italic emphasis throughout.
• LLG-0052-MFX.md: already carries twelve bold spans (exclusion-rule category names, "underlying event," "no response is deleted," "Navigation Note," directive names, "contested"). Existing emphasis is not permission to add more; the record is formatted richly enough.
• LLG-0072-SOMA.md: left fully untouched while flagged needs decision — see below.
• The trailing audit-residue limerick stanzas in every record (hard breaks added since the snapshot) were left exactly as found per #824.
• LLG-0088-B.md line 54's "breedingProgram eligibility unchanged": verified as established corpus field-name vocabulary in a record that already declares relates_to the LLG-0375/LLG-0381 breeding-program cluster. Not a containment import; not a presentation matter. Left as written.

Verification performed

• git diff on the four changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, frontmatter, or whitespace changes.
• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed.
• Compiled HTML for each changed record shows exactly one added <strong> with all <br> hard breaks and stanza structure intact.
• python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after updating the changelog trunk count and README totals.

Unresolved follow-up

• needs decision flagged on #701: LLG-0072-SOMA.md line 20 reads "declined to issue a operational override" — a word-level article slip (the corpus otherwise consistently writes "an operational"). Words are protected in presentation QA; left exactly as found pending maintainer ruling.