Presentation QA Lorelog 005: Read-First Review of Six Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00147.lorelog-005 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the six records assigned by workload issue #703 (LLG-0226-SUPR, LLG-0230-HYG, LLG-0244-FSC, LLG-0300-SC-X, LLG-0302-CNTR, LLG-0311-SRA)

What changed

Read all six assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including all related-residue appendices.
Intervening diffs disclosed: four files changed since snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6. Each diff is the same class — two-space hard breaks added to tail limerick stanzas (the #824 verse hard-break work): 4 stanzas in LLG-0226-SUPR, 5 in LLG-0230-HYG, 3 in LLG-0300-SC-X, 1 in LLG-0302-CNTR. No moves, removals, or identity changes; current files were the ones reviewed.
LLG-0244-FSC.md line 18: bolded "only use real forms," — the deactivation guidance the record turns on, issued without specifying how to distinguish real forms from shadows. Asterisks only.
LLG-0302-CNTR.md line 20: bolded "metrics blackout for scheduled improvements," — the relabeling euphemism that completes the baseline-reset cover-up. Asterisks only.

What was deliberately left alone

All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, {#...} anchors, stanza structure, indentation, two-space hard breaks, quoted/documentary material, and existing emphasis throughout.
LLG-0226-SUPR.md: prose already carries bolds on the genuine pivots (Form 32-A / 32-A-R at line 11, 32-A-NEW at line 28, STCP designation at line 42). Unchanged.
LLG-0230-HYG.md: prose already emphasized (**Hygiene Rite** line 12, **preferred canonical status** line 28, **MAP** line 53, **resolved** line 58, et al.). Unchanged.
LLG-0300-SC-X.md: already saturated — twelve-plus bold/italic spans across lines 12–24 plus a blockquote at line 38. Adding more would violate restraint. Unchanged.
LLG-0311-SRA.md: already emphasized (**fully validated emotional strain** line 22, **approved as a rest-shaped feeling** line 30, registry status names at lines 38–42); limericks 1–5 carry heavy in-verse bold. Unchanged.
Bare Brickys Filing Notes lines (no heading marker, no apostrophe) in LLG-0230-HYG:63, LLG-0244-FSC:25, LLG-0302-CNTR:22 — a widespread era convention across early-numbered lorelog records (0317, 0318, 0320, 0324, 0326, 0300 share it); not normalized.
## Haikus headings nested inside ## Related Haikus sections (all applicable records) and multi-blank-line verse separation — corpus-wide appendix conventions, left as found.
No :::note fences and no list-item verse stanzas exist in any assigned file.

Verification performed

BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, HTML ID audit, Filed certification.
git diff on the two changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes. Compiled HTML shows exactly one  in each changed record (“only use real forms,” in LLG-0244-FSC, “metrics blackout for scheduled improvements,” in LLG-0302-CNTR) with all   hard breaks intact.
git fetch origin && git merge origin/main before finalization — already up to date; counts then recounted against actual source.
python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after updating the changelog trunk count to 104 and README totals to 2,309 pages / 11 trunks / 2,298 satellites.

Unresolved follow-up

LLG-0302-CNTR.md line 6: metrics-theatre appears twice in tags (merge-era residue, present at the issue snapshot). Frontmatter is a protected region; flagged needs decision on #703 rather than normalized. The issue stays open until the maintainer resolves or explicitly waives it.