Presentation QA Lorelog 007: Read-First Review of Seven Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00066.lorelog-007 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the seven records assigned by workload issue #705 (LLG-0322-FTD, LLG-0323-ASD, LLG-0323-LC04, LLG-0324-MAP, LLG-0325-ORT, LLG-0326-DCB, LLG-0326-DXS)

What changed

• Read all seven assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. All seven files were byte-identical to snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6 (git diff <snapshot> HEAD empty on the assigned paths).
• LLG-0322-FTD.md line 15: bolded "de facto obligation that existed nowhere in the written policy" — the pivot the record's five-paragraph arc builds to, where dead template fields acquire enforceable power through reviewer habit alone. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0325-ORT.md line 13: bolded "not data loss; it is classified as completion of visibility lifecycle" — the doctrine's hinge, echoed verbatim by the record's own aphorism residue at line 32. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0326-DXS.md line 63: bolded "one directive describes recorded harm, one describes continuity deviation, and one describes metric progression" — the synthesis triad the comparative dossier exists to deliver, restated in Liaison-Office voice at line 67. Asterisks only.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, relations, {#...} heading anchors, verse stanzas, two-space hard breaks, quoted/documentary material, and the double-blank-line residue spacing throughout.
• LLG-0323-ASD.md reviewed unchanged: the body is a single two-sentence abstract (line 11) whose clause chain is uniformly dense by design; there is no internal pivot for emphasis to locate.
• LLG-0323-LC04.md reviewed unchanged: the pivot already carries structural emphasis — the archival-guidance blockquote at lines 102–103 — and the directive readings at lines 52–54 are already bolded.
• LLG-0324-MAP.md reviewed unchanged: the record already spends emphasis — bold on the protocol name (line 12), the taxonomy term (16), the registry instruction (36), "resolved" (52), and the four acronym list labels (24–34).
• LLG-0326-DCB.md reviewed unchanged: one compressed two-sentence abstract (line 11); the inversion is the whole utterance, not a pivot within it.

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.
• git diff on the three changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes.
• Compiled-article inspection of all three changed records plus unchanged LLG-0324-MAP in dist/cantilever/.

Unresolved follow-up

• LLG-0325-ORT.md line 217 opens a limerick line with "til it shone (double quote) where sibling LLG-0326-DCB.md line 195 writes 'til they bled — a likely typo inside protected verse. Flagged as needs decision on #705; not edited.
• LLG-0326-DXS.md lines 69–75 fences "Brickys Filing Notes" as a ```md block while LLG-0324-MAP.md lines 66–70 presents the same element unfenced — inconsistent presentation of the same artifact, plus a missing apostrophe in the fenced label. Flagged as needs decision on #705; not edited.