Presentation QA Lorelog 008: Read-First Review of Seven Records
Maintenance ID: 0.1.00149.lorelog-008
Date: 2026-10-08
Scope: content/lorelog/ — the seven records assigned by workload issue #706 (LLG-0327-AVA, LLG-0327-AVR, LLG-0328-MEC, LLG-0329-OIR, LLG-0330-TDE, LLG-0331-TPI, LLG-0332-SCD)
What changed
- Read all seven assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. All seven files were byte-identical to snapshot
8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6(git diff <snapshot> HEADempty on the assigned paths). Each record earned one clause-level bold pivot in its own body prose; no related-verse residue was emphasized. LLG-0327-AVA.mdline 76: bolded "We taught the findings to sound proud of themselves." — the confession inside Brickys Filing Notes where the record's euphemism machinery gets named in first person. The only assigned record with a numbered Transform procedure (lines 40–44). Asterisks only.LLG-0327-AVR.mdline 11: bolded "no longer arriving under any name eligible for corrective action" — the terminal clause where the compressed abstract's mechanism lands as permanent consequence. Asterisks only.LLG-0328-MEC.mdline 11: bolded "a more durable source of truth than the underlying record it claimed merely to describe" — the reversal the exception-circularity record builds to. Asterisks only.LLG-0329-OIR.mdline 13: bolded "sentences that begin with "for historical reasons" and end without specifying whose history is being preserved" — the balanced construction that is the record's sharpest observation, inside its three-paragraph body (the only multi-paragraph body among the abstract-style records). Asterisks only.LLG-0330-TDE.mdline 11: bolded "separately legible, jointly admissible, and procedurally unreachable for reconciliation" — the triadic close naming the operational posture the record exists to describe. Asterisks only.LLG-0331-TPI.mdline 11: bolded "fully documented without becoming distinguishable" — the terminal clause where documentation and distinction formally part ways. Asterisks only.LLG-0332-SCD.mdline 19: bolded "converting it into an operational disqualifier" — the clause where preservation flips into weaponization, inside the record's standalone pivot paragraph. Asterisks only.
What was deliberately left alone
- All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags,
{#...}heading anchors, verse stanzas, two-space hard breaks, quoted/documentary material, and the double-blank-line residue spacing throughout. LLG-0328-MEC.mdlines 30–46: two indented verse stanzas embedded as list items inside Related Aphorisms — the list-item verse style under maintainer review, left exactly as found.LLG-0327-AVR.mdlines 151–159: profane register in the limerick residue is the record's voice, not a defect.LLG-0329-OIR.mdlines 195–215: trailing limericks shift to three-space indentation where earlier ones use flush/two-space — residue drift, preserved.LLG-0332-SCD.mdline 34: the telegraphic disposition ("context preserved. Exception denied. No data loss identified.") already carries its own register; adding emphasis would gild it.- No
:::notefences exist in any assigned record; nothing required normalization or a needs-decision on that count.
Verification performed
BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh— passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py— PASS after docket insertion (changelog 104/104, README totals recounted to actual).git diffon the seven changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes.- Compiled-article inspection of all seven changed records in
dist/cantilever/.
Unresolved follow-up
LLG-0331-TPI.mdline 187 closes a limerick with "Where the priorities got engineer." — reads as a clipped "engineered," either meter compression or a typo inside protected verse. Flagged as needs decision on #706; not edited.