Presentation QA Lorelog 010: Read-First Review of Seven Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00151.lorelog-010 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the seven records assigned by workload issue #708 (LLG-0350-DOGE-CHARTER, LLG-0351-DOGE-INTAKE, LLG-0352-DOGE-RUBRIC, LLG-0354-DOGE-EDGE-CASES, LLG-0355-GEX-2R, LLG-0356-DOGE-MEMO-FEELINGS, LLG-0357-DOGE-RID)

What changed

• Read all seven assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. All seven files were byte-identical to snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6 (git diff <snapshot> HEAD empty on the assigned paths).
• LLG-0351-DOGE-INTAKE.md line 138: bolded "It is a finding of origin." — the doctrinal pivot of Form GEX-1's certification block, the clause that reframes RECLASSIFIED from accusation to routing. The companion clause at line 137 stays plain. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0352-DOGE-RUBRIC.md line 56: bolded "It is a ruling that the environment was engineered." — the sentence the staff-guidance section exists to deliver, standing alone as its own paragraph between the filer-exonerating setup and the evidentiary rationale. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0357-DOGE-RID.md line 25: bolded "consistency of dispute without agreement of meaning" — the oxymoron the dispute record builds to and the phrase Standards classifies as workable. Asterisks only.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, relations, {#...} heading anchors, verse stanzas, two-space hard breaks, quoted/documentary material, form checkboxes and fill-in rules, and the double-blank-line residue spacing throughout.
• LLG-0350-DOGE-CHARTER.md reviewed unchanged: the record's pivot already carries structural emphasis as the blockquoted stance at lines 101–103, and bold is already spent on "retroactive origin recognized" (line 14), "not" (line 32), and the three test names (lines 40–42). Any addition would have been decoration.
• LLG-0354-DOGE-EDGE-CASES.md reviewed unchanged: the adopted position is already a blockquote at lines 61–62 (mirroring the charter), and the three edge-case cluster names are already bolded at lines 16–27.
• LLG-0355-GEX-2R.md reviewed unchanged: the comic pivot is already italicized at lines 93–95 ("improvise respectfully"), and the section heads carry existing bold. Noted residue: this form writes bare [ ] checkbox lines (lines 28–37 and onward) where sibling GEX-1 uses - [ ] task-list items — preserved as found; form-generation drift is plausible archival residue.
• LLG-0356-DOGE-MEMO-FEELINGS.md reviewed unchanged pending the needs-decision flag below: the three "A feeling may be ..." sentences (lines 21–25) work as an unemphasized parallel triad — bolding one would break the figure — and the two doctrinal statements are already blockquoted (lines 13, 35).

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.
• git diff on the three changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes.
• python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after updating the changelog trunk count and README totals.
• Compiled-article inspection of all three changed records plus unchanged LLG-0355-GEX-2R in dist/cantilever/: new <strong> elements land on the intended sentences only; verse <br /> structure and checkbox rendering unchanged.

Unresolved follow-up

• LLG-0356-DOGE-MEMO-FEELINGS.md line 157 carries a literal mid-line backslash — As lived creation\Isn't enough. The estimate. — where the stanza's meter and every sibling limerick indicate a fifth line. The same artifact recurs at LLG-0358-DOGE-W3.md line 108, LLG-0365-BAIT-B2A.md lines 101 and 124, and their mirrors in content/limericks/LIM-LLG-0356-DOGE-MEMO-FEELINGS.md, LIM-LLG-0358-DOGE-W3.md, LIM-LLG-0365-BAIT-B2A.md, and content/mascots/019.kindy-mcexistentialcrisis.md. Verse regions are protected and #824-adjacent; flagged as needs decision on #708, not edited.