Presentation QA Lorelog 012: Read-First Review of Nine Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00153.lorelog-012 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the nine records assigned by workload issue #710 (LLG-0366-BAIT-B4A through LLG-0374-DOGE-LA)

What changed

• Read all nine assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line. Every assigned file was identical to snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6 at review time; no intervening diffs to disclose.
• LLG-0366-BAIT-B4A.md line 13: bolded "maintained agitation held below the threshold of decisive action" — the classification criterion that keeps a calm, dutiful presentation inside RAGE architecture. The pivot of the advisory.
• LLG-0367-BAIT-B3A.md line 13: bolded "nothing needs to feel fake for the rerouting to hold" — the reason clause for why civic substitution qualifies as one of the system's most elegant thefts.
• LLG-0370-XEV.md line 13: bolded "transformed ambient confusion into named incompatibility" — the verdict that made the Weighting Table a success by the archive's own accounting.
• LLG-0371-BAIT-B2B.md line 13: bolded "the structure producing it remains external, social, and highly engineered" — the counterweight clause carrying the record's provenance argument.
• LLG-0372-BAIT-B5.md line 13: bolded "crowds are a routing condition" — the archive's doctrinal position on Mirror Outrage, echoed by the record's own limerick at line 154.
• LLG-0373-DOGE-W5.md line 13: bolded "Resolution became ceremonial." — the standalone sentence where the congestion event lands; echoed by the limerick's "technically green" at line 146.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, anchors, tables, quoted/documentary material (including the **SIMULATOR WEATHER ADVISORY** header and Kindy's capitalized cover sheet), list-item verse, stanza structure, indentation, and two-space hard breaks.
• LLG-0368-RAGE-AQ.md reviewed unchanged: the queue-category list at lines 19-21 already carries bold labels (**MN-O disputes:** et al.); existing emphasis is not a reason to add more.
• LLG-0369-DOGE-SWAB.md reviewed unchanged: documentary bold already present in the standard bulletin text.
• LLG-0374-DOGE-LA.md reviewed unchanged: the evidence-class list at lines 19-22 already carries bold labels; the "Stub:" aphorism heading and British "standardise" are residue, preserved.
• Recurring house quirks — the stray ## Haikus heading inside each Related Haikus section, {#...-2} duplicate-heading anchors, and trailing spaces on prose lines — left as found.
• LLG-0367-BAIT-B3A.md line 108 carries "Offormat" inside a limerick, a probable missing space ("Of format") in protected verse. Not fixed in a presentation pass; flagged needs decision on #710.

Verification performed

• git diff on the six changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes.
• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed.
• python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after recounting the changelog trunk and README totals.
• Compiled articles inspected for all nine records: exactly one new <strong> per changed record, pre-existing emphasis only on the three unchanged records, no literal ** rendered, <br> hard breaks intact. Preview checks at 1280×800, 1440×900, and 390×844 showed no overflow; the {#...-2} anchor on LLG-0366 resolves.

Unresolved follow-up

• One needs decision item posted on #710: "Offormat" at LLG-0367-BAIT-B3A.md:108 (probable missing space in limerick verse). The issue stays open until the maintainer resolves or explicitly waives it.