Presentation QA Lorelog 014: Read-First Review of Eight Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00155.lorelog-014 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the eight records assigned by workload issue #712 (LLG-0381-OPTOUT, LLG-0382-BPD, LLG-0383-RAW, LLG-0384-CIR, LLG-0385-CEB, LLG-0385-SED, LLG-0386-LODGE-MERGE, LLG-0387-SURV-NOP)

What changed

• Read all eight assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. All eight files were byte-identical to snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6 (git diff <snapshot> HEAD empty on the assigned paths).
• LLG-0382-BPD.md line 78: bolded "This case file does not assert the existence of a breeding program." — the pivot where the dossier turns from accumulated evidence to formal denial. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0383-RAW.md line 24: bolded "No such proof has yet been produced." — the flat non-resolution after two irreconcilable review streams. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0385-CEB.md line 15: bolded "The Co-Existence Endorsement Bureau inherited this pattern and forgot the qualifier about reality." — the turn on which the five-signature legitimacy loop depends. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0385-SED.md line 20: bolded the clause "approved change is safest when it fails slightly" — the circulating doctrine the record exists to document. Trailing two-space residue after "occurred." preserved.
• LLG-0386-LODGE-MERGE.md line 15: bolded "It is, however, being used." — the unratified clerk position made operative anyway.
• LLG-0387-SURV-NOP.md line 23: bolded "The notes remain attached but are not headline-visible." — the record's dissent buried in plain sight.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, {#...} heading anchors, verse stanza/indentation structure, two-space hard breaks, quoted/documentary material, list structure, and trailing-whitespace residue throughout.
• LLG-0381-OPTOUT.md reviewed unchanged: the prose already carries two documentary bolds (form label at line 14, requested annotation at line 36) plus two blockquotes in ~35 lines; the standalone verdicts at lines 22/44/46 land without added emphasis — a third marker would decorate, not pivot.
• LLG-0384-CIR.md reviewed unchanged: the record's real pivot is the third status inside a symmetric three-item list (lines 18–20); singling out one list item would read as a rendering accident, and the appeal line at 24 is coda rather than spine.
• LLG-0383-RAW.md limerick residue carries 18 bold spans and one italic from a raw-ingest era (**stamped**, **jerked themselves off**, **circle-jerked**, et al., lines 115–175). Left as found; flagged needs decision on #712, mirroring the #675 flag on sibling LIM-LLG-0383-RAW.

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.
• git diff on the six changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes.
• Compiled-article inspection of all eight records in dist/cantilever/lorelog/: exactly one new <strong> per changed record (0381 retains its 2 documentary strongs; 0383 shows 19 = 18 verse residue + 1 prose pivot; 0384 retains 0); <br> hard-break counts intact on all eight articles.
• python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after recounting the changelog trunk and README totals.

Unresolved follow-up

• LLG-0383-RAW.md limerick emphasis density (18 bold spans, 1 italic) — flagged needs decision on #712; not rebalanced.
• LLG-0387-SURV-NOP.md line 36 aphorism ends "underlying work?." (?.) — verified the same ?. residue in at least five other records (LLG-0820-MCR, LLG-0389-AKL, DS-404-ALPHA, LLG-0390-KCL, LLG-0379-ROBOT-MEMO); a corpus-wide generation pattern rather than a per-record defect. Flagged needs decision on #712 for a one-time maintainer call; not edited.