Presentation QA Lorelog 016: Read-First Review of Eight Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00157.lorelog-016 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the eight records assigned by workload issue #714 (LLG-0393-BDA, LLG-0393-RBR, LLG-0394-PRS, LLG-0395-MSS, LLG-0396-MSP, LLG-0397-SBF, LLG-0398-CCO, LLG-0399-OCS)

What changed

• Read all eight assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including each record's Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue. All eight files were byte-identical to snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6 (git diff <snapshot> HEAD empty on the assigned paths).
• LLG-0393-BDA.md line 13: bolded "already begun issuing instructions" — the record's turn from heritage display to operational authority, ahead of the numbered escalation that documents it. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0393-RBR.md line 20: bolded "most durable policy arrives that way eventually" — the majority's answer and the record's thesis; the moment decorative stitching is ratified by aphorism. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0393-RBR.md line 23: inserted one blank line before the --- that separates body from Related residue. Verified in compiled output: without the blank line Boris parses the --- as a setext underline and renders the closing sentence ("The phrase is now listed in the standing-resolutions ledger…") as an <h2> with an auto-generated anchor; with it the sentence stays a <p> and the --- emits a real <hr />, matching the fenced usage in LLG-0399-OCS lines 22/40/71/92/115.
• LLG-0394-PRS.md line 13: bolded "in a quieter voice" — the record's mechanism pivot: the 1998 map was elevated by reverence, not vote.
• LLG-0395-MSS.md line 21: bolded "started choosing" — the inversion where custody of the artifact becomes the artifact choosing its officeholder.
• LLG-0396-MSP.md line 22: bolded "an undocumented rubric" — the substitution the title names: inspiration quietly become scoring criteria.
• LLG-0397-SBF.md line 17: bolded "a temporary grant mechanism" — the hinge where breakfast optimism entered the ledger as spendable revenue.
• LLG-0398-CCO.md line 21: bolded "distributed them into tone" — the merger's actual outcome: offices retired on paper, multiplied in etiquette.
• Recounted content/changelog/ including this docket and set the trunk Count: to 104; README totals updated to actual source: 2,309 pages, 11 trunks, 2,298 satellites.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, {#...} heading anchors (including MSP's -3 de-duplicated suffix at line 106), link targets and labels, quoted/documentary material, verse stanzas, indentation, and two-space hard breaks.
• LLG-0399-OCS.md reviewed unchanged: the record already spends emphasis — fifteen strong runs across the indicator checklist (lines 48–65), handling decision (98–107), Adorable Archive findings (147–158), and residue verse (270), plus blockquotes at 173 and 183–184 and italics at 11/79/82/85. No additional emphasis earned.
• Each changed record's Related-residue section quotes the pivot line verbatim; only the body occurrence was emphasized, residue left as found.
• Off-topic residue aphorisms in each record (BDA's "big data" run at 52–68, RBR's "risk-based routing" at 43–59, PRS's "performance review" at 49–65, MSS's "schedule synchronization" at 48–64, MSP's "managed service" at 49–65, SBF's "system boundary" at 49–65, CCO's "compliance" at 48–64) — generation-era residue, preserved.
• OCS limerick stanzas after the first carry irregular trailing whitespace and whitespace-only separator lines (277, 285, 293, …); verse staging already normalizes rendering to <br /> breaks at publish time — consistent with the verse hard-break track under #824, left exactly as found.

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: collection counts, verse hard-break check, Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.
• git diff on the seven changed records confirms emphasis markers plus one blank line; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes.
• Compiled-article inspection of all eight assigned records in dist/cantilever/: exactly one new <strong> per changed record, RBR's <hr /> restored and setext heading removed, all <br> hard breaks intact, OCS byte-identical in source and unchanged in output.

Unresolved follow-up

• The abutting --- setext pattern verified in RBR also exists in LLG-0389-AKL.md line 23, LLG-0390-HAP.md line 23, LLG-0391-RCD.md line 20, and LLG-0392-SGL.md line 23 — outside this assignment's paths, noted for their own workload issues rather than swept into this diff.