Presentation QA Lorelog 019: Read-First Review of Five Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00160.lorelog-019 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the five records assigned by workload issue #717 (LLG-0405-MEL through LLG-0408-AH1)

What changed

• Read all five assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including related-residue appendices. Four files were identical to snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6; LLG-0405-MEL.md carried an intervening change that added two-space hard breaks to its final two limerick stanzas (#824 verse work) — disclosed, not disturbed.
• LLG-0405-MEL.md line 101: bolded "as if it never did." — the closing thesis clause where stopped work is still officially measured. Phrase-level bold keeps the mid-sentence hard break on line 100 outside the span.
• LLG-0405-SAC.md line 100: bolded "We are no longer allowed to claim that 'no outages occurred' as proof that nothing happened." — the charter's anti-denial doctrine. The trailing two-space break is preserved outside the markers.
• LLG-0406-FSD.md line 67: bolded "This step changed every diagram and zero lines of code." — the CAAR designation's operational emptiness in one line. Trailing break preserved.
• LLG-0407-SSP.md line 125: bolded "Symbols are the only tools the Lorelog desk has that do not require COMA's approval." — the closing verdict on the desk's actual leverage.
• LLG-0408-AH1.md line 94: bolded "SCAS technically promised similar things." — the single line that undercuts the entire mandatory-hooks section.
• Recounted content/changelog/ source records, including this docket, and set the trunk's Count: to 104. README totals updated to match source: 2,309 pages, 11 trunks, 2,298 satellites.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, headings and their {#...} anchors, lists, tables, blockquotes, struck-through marginalia, and all verse: every haiku and limerick stanza, indentation, and two-space hard break, including the post-snapshot breaks in LLG-0405-MEL.
• Pervasive trailing two-space residue in prose list items across all five records — consistent with the collection's generation-era style; left exactly as found.
• Existing emphasis everywhere. The five records already carried between four and fourteen bold-bearing lines apiece (threshold names, designations, doctrine phrases); none was rebalanced.
• The ## Haikus subheading nested under ### record titles in the Related Haikus appendices — uniform generated structure across the collection, not a per-record defect.

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics and full Cantilever compile.
• python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after updating the changelog trunk count and README totals.
• git diff confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes besides the five bold spans. Compiled HTML shows exactly one new <strong> per changed record with all <br> hard breaks and stanza structure intact.

Unresolved follow-up

• None. No :::note fences, list-item verse stanzas, or non-formatting defects were found in the assigned set.