Presentation QA Lorelog 020: Read-First Review of Seven Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00161.lorelog-020 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the seven records assigned by workload issue #718 (LLG-0408-DTS-DEP, LLG-0409-IEL, LLG-0409-PRE, LLG-040X-ANLAS, LLG-0410-BWS, LLG-0411-RRC, LLG-0414-WAD)

What changed

• Read all seven assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each.
• Intervening diff disclosed: commit ed4ff55b (0.1.00056.verse-hard-break-consistency) landed after snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6 and restored two-space stanza hard breaks in LLG-0408-DTS-DEP, LLG-0409-IEL, LLG-0410-BWS, and LLG-0411-RRC. Whitespace-only; current files reread in full and reviewed as they now stand.
• LLG-0410-BWS.md line 17: bolded "witness function had silently degraded into witness appearance" — the registry-staff objection that names the drift mechanism the whole incident describes. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0411-RRC.md line 17: bolded "mutual recognition into mutual substitution" — the classification crossing point where the opposing reviewers' case turns. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0414-WAD.md line 26: bolded "The workaround retired by becoming the floor." — Bricky's Trauma note, the record's thesis compressed into one epitaph. Asterisks only.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, relations, {#...} heading anchors, verse stanzas, two-space hard breaks (including the restored breaks from ed4ff55b, per #824), indented limerick continuation lines, quoted/documentary material, and the uneven blank-line residue spacing throughout.
• LLG-0408-DTS-DEP.md reviewed unchanged: the record already spends emphasis — thirteen bold spans across the chronology timestamps (lines 15–20), observed-effect labels (23–26), and departmental-response labels (29–31). The Unresolved Findings hedge at line 34 is a forensic paragraph, not a pivot point.
• LLG-0409-IEL.md reviewed unchanged: zero existing emphasis, but the flat register is the artifact's content — the record is an adopted administrative explanation layer whose monotone performs the laundering it describes (the breach-to-"redistribution" turn at line 19). Bold there would editorialize the document rather than aid it.
• LLG-0409-PRE.md reviewed unchanged: nineteen existing bold spans, including the component labels (43–50), the Interpretation Desk pivot already bolded at line 57, and the doctrine terms in the Archive Position (156–158).
• LLG-040X-ANLAS.md reviewed unchanged: twenty-eight existing bold spans; the record is among the most densely emphasized in the collection.
• Ordinary prose bullets carrying trailing two-space hard breaks in LLG-0409-PRE and LLG-040X-ANLAS were left exactly as found; list-item verse style is under maintainer review.

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.
• git diff on the three changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes.
• Compiled-article inspection of all three changed records in dist/cantilever/lorelog/: each renders exactly one <strong> span at the intended pivot; limerick <br> hard breaks intact (BWS 32, RRC 12, WAD 20).
• python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after count reconciliation.

Unresolved follow-up

• None. No :::note fences and no non-formatting defects were found in the assigned population.