Lorelog-021 presentation QA: six earned pivots, one unchanged, two needs decision

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00162.lorelog-021 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — issue #719 assignment (9 records)

What changed

Nine assigned records read in full, frontmatter through final line. Six earned a single **bold** pivot each; emphasis markers only, no word/order/whitespace changes:

• LLG-0418-RSK.md line 48: bolded "the visible proof of handling had begun to survive more reliably than the handling itself" — the archive-position sentence where the Queue Theatre threshold lands.
• LLG-0422-SCP.md line 15: bolded "the exception became easier to support than to retire" — the clause where accumulated accommodations invert into the record's thesis.
• LLG-0427-RAC.md line 15: bolded "compatibility with prior breakage was not evidence of repair" — the opposing reviewers' analytic pivot that splits the record.
• LLG-0430-HBR.md line 17: bolded "historical burden is easiest to preserve when it no longer sounds temporary enough to question" — the archive's own named danger.
• LLG-0436-ASF.md line 45: bolded "Freshness did not prove intervention." — the archive-position pivot sentence.
• LLG-0441-TSR.md line 15: bolded "The mark survived because it remained easier to govern than to unsettle." — the sentence carrying the inherited-conditions thesis.

Recounted content/changelog/ source records including this docket and set the trunk Count: to actual. README totals recounted to match source.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, link targets, quoted/documentary material, and all existing emphasis throughout.
• All verse: list-item stanza structure and two-space hard breaks untouched, per the #824 boundary. Intervening hard-break restoration ed4ff55b on LLG-0422-SCP, LLG-0436-ASF, LLG-0446-OQF, and LLG-0447-SLA was disclosed and preserved exactly.
• LLG-0450-SEAMS-PRESENT-TENSE.md: reviewed unchanged. Already carries ~50 authored bold spans (Location:/Observation:/Evidence:/Marker: per seam, "The future had a plot. The present has a process." at line 16, "Seams don't heal. They propagate." at line 121) plus a bolded table and the italic end-mark; nothing further is earned.
• LLG-0446-OQF.md line 61 and LLG-0447-SLA.md line 67: a bare RelatedEntries text line heads a related-note + limerick block in each record — orphaned residue of the legacy relatedEntries field (see scripts/repair_relationships.py, metadata/relationship-recovery.json), rendering as a stray word on the compiled page. Left exactly as found; flagged needs decision on #719.
• Stray single trailing space in LLG-0422-SCP line 38 prose left as residue; single trailing spaces are not hard breaks.

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics plus full Cantilever compile.
• git diff on changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no trailing-whitespace additions.
• python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after trunk count and README recount.
• Snapshot reconciliation: git diff 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6..HEAD touched four assigned files, all from hard-break restoration ed4ff55b; current files re-read in full and disclosed above.

Unresolved follow-up

• Two needs decision items on #719: the bare RelatedEntries token blocks in LLG-0446-OQF.md (line 61) and LLG-0447-SLA.md (line 67). The issue stays open until the maintainer resolves or explicitly waives them.