Presentation QA Lorelog 022: Read-First Review of Five Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00163.lorelog-022 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the five records assigned by workload issue #720 (LLG-0451-JIGGLER-EMPATHEGY-BRIDGE, LLG-0452-SOMA-COMA-CHRONOLOGY, LLG-0453-MASCOT-CHARACTER-ARC-MAP, LLG-04xx-CLIN-404, LLG-0811-EG)

What changed

• Read all five assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. All five files were byte-identical to snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6 (git diff <snapshot> HEAD empty on the assigned paths, before and after merging origin/main).
• LLG-0811-EG.md line 28: bolded "No corrective flag was raised, as all outputs remained within acceptable scoring variance bands." — the terminal verdict of the inflation event, and the only line in the prose body (lines 12–28) that states consequence rather than mechanism. The source record for the curve-coherence doctrine was the sole record in this cohort carrying no marked pivot; the records derived from it already bold their restatements of the same point. Asterisks only.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, relations, {#...} heading anchors, verse stanzas, indentation, two-space hard breaks, quoted/documentary material, and the multi-blank-line residue spacing throughout.
• LLG-0451-JIGGLER-EMPATHEGY-BRIDGE.md reviewed unchanged: the record already spends its emphasis — "Thesis (narrow):" (line 14), "metric homeostasis" (44), the institutional-ancestor sentence (54), the four bolded curve labels (58–61), "The metric creates the pathology it then discovers." (73), "Labor translation:" (81), the Serotonin Sam verdict (89), and "Boundary." (97). A further pivot would exceed the cap.
• LLG-0452-SOMA-COMA-CHRONOLOGY.md reviewed unchanged: the pivot already exists as the bolded operational question at line 14. Remaining bold is structural labeling — table entry IDs (22–29), pattern names (35–39), entity names (45–48), and cross-reference labels (54–56).
• LLG-0453-MASCOT-CHARACTER-ARC-MAP.md reviewed unchanged: a consistent bold field-label system runs all five mascot sections, and the prose already carries its pivot in "structural identity" (line 158).
• LLG-04xx-CLIN-404.md reviewed unchanged: heavy existing emphasis — form-field labels with two-space hard breaks (26–41), incident-timeline labels (57–59), "Bricky Pause" (61), "Nurse Nudge" (63), ritual-usage labels (73–79), and margin-residue labels (89–92). Canonical id lorelog/LLG-04XX-CLIN-0404 (uppercase) diverges from filename LLG-04xx-CLIN-404 — identity residue, preserved.

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, HTML ID audit, Filed certification.
• python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after updating the changelog trunk count and README totals.
• git diff on the changed record confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes.
• Compiled-article inspection of changed LLG-0811-EG and unchanged LLG-0453-MASCOT-CHARACTER-ARC-MAP in dist/cantilever/.

Unresolved follow-up

• LLG-0811-EG.md line 107: aphorism residue truncates mid-sentence — "...or operational conditions described within the. Meaning adjusted around the winning selector." Incomplete sentences are preserved residue per issue instruction; flagged as needs decision on #720, not edited.
• LLG-0453-MASCOT-CHARACTER-ARC-MAP.md line 232: limerick line "And the audit was signed withoutaint" compresses or drops a word inside protected verse. Flagged as needs decision on #720; not edited.
• LLG-0453-MASCOT-CHARACTER-ARC-MAP.md lines 91 and 116 write **Defining Action**: with the colon outside the bold where sibling labels (21, 47, 69) keep it inside — inconsistent label markup across the record's own convention. Flagged as needs decision on #720; not edited.