Presentation QA Lorelog 025: Read-First Review of Six Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00166.lorelog-025 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the six records assigned by workload issue #723 (LLG-0861-ACS, LLG-0861-ARC, LLG-0861-FPP, LLG-0861-FRL, LLG-0863-MAS, LLG-0864-WRC)

What changed

• Read all six assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. All six files were byte-identical to snapshot 8997eebee2a4e620c5dd47fcea97abf515c4cac6 (git diff <snapshot> HEAD empty on the assigned paths).
• LLG-0861-ACS.md line 50: bolded "harder to object to than to file" — the mechanism of atmosphere-assisted closure in one phrase, the pivot the Conditions and Shift sections build toward. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0861-FPP.md line 65: bolded "the warmth retroactively changed species" — the classification flip the record exists to document, where a surviving relation-form becomes a procedural instrument. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0861-FRL.md line 33: bolded "exhaustion wearing good posture" — the record's definitional reclassification of misread calm, later echoed by its own aphorism residue at line 124. Asterisks only.
• LLG-0863-MAS.md line 91: bolded "The seal remains persuasive." — the verdict half of the record's closing asymmetry (the warning is accurate; the seal still wins). Asterisks only.

What was deliberately left alone

• All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, relations, {#...} heading anchors, verse stanzas, two-space hard breaks, quoted/documentary material, and the double-blank-line residue spacing throughout.
• LLG-0861-ARC.md reviewed unchanged: the record already carries a functional bold label ("Related custody condition:", line 111) and an italic documentary span (line 112); its verdict pairs (lines 73–75, 107–109) already supply the emphasis structure.
• LLG-0864-WRC.md reviewed unchanged: three functional bolds already serve the Chronology ("Cycle 1/2/3.", lines 35–47) plus an italic care annotation (line 124); the record's verdict lines (105–106, 119, 162–167) already land without further emphasis.
• LLG-0861-ACS.md Archival Residue stanzas (lines 108–120) carry no hard breaks; left exactly as found per the verse hard-break boundary (#824) and the list-item verse style still under maintainer review.

Verification performed

• BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.
• git diff on the four changed records confirms emphasis markers only; no word, order, ID, link, or whitespace changes.
• Compiled-article inspection of all four changed records plus unchanged LLG-0861-ARC and LLG-0864-WRC in dist/cantilever/: each new pivot renders <strong> in context; verse <br> counts unchanged (48–50 per record, 20 in WRC).

Unresolved follow-up

• LLG-0864-WRC.md lines 192–195: ## Related Haikus heads an empty section — no stub subheading, no verse — while every sibling record in this assignment carries haiku content. It compiles to nothing visible in the verse-residue panel (only Aphorisms and Limericks labels render), so no reader-facing damage, but removing or filling the dangling section is a structural call beyond presentation authority. Flagged as needs decision on #723; not edited.