Presentation QA Mascots 018: Read-First Review of 8 Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00188.mascots-018 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/mascots/ — the 8 records assigned by workload issue #745 (085.rot-mcmascotterton.md, 121.archiva-dustwhisper.md, 201.quill-staticvox.md, 202.ledger-shadeledger.md, 203.cinder-forgememo.md, 204.pump-razorbackfuel.md, 205.texaco-tumbleweed.md, 206.diesel-dkdriller.md)

What changed

  • Read all 8 assigned records in full, frontmatter through final related-residue line. No file changed since snapshot 8997eebe (git diff empty); line counts matched the assignment table.
  • 085.rot-mcmascotterton.md lines 31–36: inserted five blank lines splitting the biography's six run-together source lines into their authored blocks (thesis line, three body paragraphs, jurisdiction line, **Traits:** label). Previously the whole block compiled as one run-on <p> ending in the traits label. Also bolded "They are in denial, on purpose." — the record's thesis pivot (deliberate denial as function).
  • 201.quill-staticvox.md line 18–19: blank line between the two authored biography paragraphs. Bolded "It didn’t." — the deadpan verdict that pivots the 17-hour distress-signal anecdote.
  • 202.ledger-shadeledger.md line 28: bolded "the intention of imbalance" — the record's definitional not-X-but-Y pivot (transactions vs. intent). Biography already carried correct block separation; nothing else moved.
  • 203.cinder-forgememo.md line 18–19: blank line between biography paragraphs. Bolded "both creation and destruction" — the record's working duality, stated once.
  • 204.pump-razorbackfuel.md line 18–19: blank line between biography paragraphs. Bolded "whether sauce stains count as metadata" — where roadside biography turns into the archive's core question.
  • 205.texaco-tumbleweed.md line 18–19: blank line between biography paragraphs. No emphasis added; the record's turns live in residue and read level.
  • 206.diesel-dkdriller.md line 18–19: blank line between biography paragraphs. No emphasis added; the "fossil fuel emotions" beat is a gag, not a pivot.
  • 121.archiva-dustwhisper.md: reviewed unchanged. Single authored biography paragraph, proper ## System Incident list, no stat block or run-on prose. Its strongest line ("The archive does not forget; it misfiles with conviction.") sits inside the Aphorisms residue block — quoted material, not an edit target.

Whitespace and asterisks only; every changed line is word-identical after stripping **.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, tags, titles, anchors ({#...}), lists, blockquotes, --- rules, checkbox addenda, bare [](url) reference links, and every existing emphasis marker including the italics convention in verse.
  • Stat blocks (**Role:**-style consecutive lines, e.g. 201–206 lines 11–14) and 085's ## Rotkeeper Alignment sigil lines (25–27): compiled run-on <p> verified in dist/cantilever/mascots/M-0201.html, but this is the dominant convention across ~70 mascot records — already tracked corpus-wide in #833. Left run-on pending maintainer decision.
  • 202 line 63–64 "Recommended procedure:" / "Do not open the Vault expecting closure." — run-on, but the colon reads as intended lead-in; not a defect worth touching.
  • 202 lines 78–82 Anomalies list mixes * and - markers; compiles as one list. Existing markup, preserved.
  • All verse hard breaks untouched: every assigned record's ## Haikus and ## Limerick Log regions carry two-space breaks on all non-final stanza lines (verified 52–57 per file); none needed restoration. Aphorism entries embedding verse as prose (e.g. 085 line 62's "Clean build in the night, …") are a single-line residue convention consistent across all 8 records — left as authored.

Verification performed

  • python3 read-only run-on scan across all 8 files; every consecutive-line block enumerated and classified (prose vs. stat block vs. verse) before any edit.
  • Compiled-article inspection before edits: M-0201.html stat block and biography confirmed as run-on <p>; M-0085.html alignment sigils and biography confirmed run-on; haiku <br /> rendering confirmed intact.
  • git diff review after edits: blank lines and ** only; no word, order, frontmatter, ID, anchor, or markup changes.
  • BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed after the edits.
  • Post-edit compiled inspection of all 7 changed records: biographies emit separate <p> blocks, bold pivots emit <strong>, stat blocks and protected verse byte-identical to pre-edit.

Unresolved follow-up

  • The mascot stat-block / sigil-line run-on convention (6 of 8 assigned records affected) remains a collection-level decision tracked in #833.