Presentation QA Mascots 030: Read-First Review of 6 Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00200.mascots-030 Date: 2026-10-08 Scope: content/mascots/ — the 6 records assigned by workload issue #757 (297.minute-absolution.md through 304.brother-optout-pending.md)

What changed

  • Read all six assigned records in full, frontmatter through final limerick line, including residue appendices.
  • 298.tender-escrow.md line 75: bolded "Sometimes it is enough for care to be late." — the biography's closing line and the failure signature's definitional landing. Asterisks only.
  • 299.seal-of-maybe-enough.md line 30: bolded "administrative truce" — the coined definitional phrase the Distinction paragraph lands on. Asterisks only.
  • 300.friendship-preamble.md line 15: bolded "the polite preamble before a devastating audit" — the compressed pivot naming what the mascot is. Asterisks only.
  • 301.friendrick-the-extant.md: block-spacing repairs verified against compiled output, plus one bold pivot. Lines 11–14 were four paragraph-units (definition, origin, thesis, current task) compiling as one run-on <p> — split into four paragraphs. Line 42 "Interpretation log:" was lazily absorbed into the haiku blockquote as a fourth quote line, and lines 47–50 ("Reseed outcome:" label, outcome sentence, closing couplet) were swallowed into the final <li> — detached both labels and split the outcome sentence from the closing couplet. Bolded "It simply stopped finding anyone home." — the incident's landing and the record's emotional pivot. Blank lines and asterisks only; no words touched.
  • 304.brother-optout-pending.md line 23: bolded "mistakes careful refusal for evidence of continued value" — the clause that defines the clerk's failure signature. Asterisks only.

What was deliberately left alone

  • 297.minute-absolution.md: reviewed unchanged — **Function:** / **Distinction:** labels and italic *not* (lines 13–15) already mark the record's pivots; the emphasis budget is spent.
  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, tags, titles, anchors ({#...}), headings, lists, quoted material, stat-block conventions, and every existing emphasis marker (including 301's first-mention **Friendrick the Extant** and verse italics).
  • Every haiku and limerick line: all carry the two-space hard break; byte-level check found no #824-class drift in this batch. Stanza gaps, flat limerick clusters, and residue blank lines preserved exactly.
  • 301 lines 255–339: limerick B-lines carry 2–3 leading spaces (printed-limerick indentation convention). Nonstandard verse layout — flagged needs decision in the PR, not normalized. Renders harmlessly (≤3 spaces are stripped as continuation lines).
  • 301 line 60: relatedLorelog fused word — probable non-formatting defect (likely intended "related Lorelog"), flagged needs decision; word fixes are out of presentation scope.
  • 301 line 9 epigraph-style H1 ("He was your friend. Then your top 8...") and the --- + trailing-empty-> epigraph block — deliberate documentary texture, preserved.
  • Empty ## Haiku Log + ### {…-3} shells followed by ## Haikus (297, 298, 299, 300, 304) — established collection convention, not a per-record fix.
  • 298 lines 15–16 and 299 lines 15–16, 36–37: deliberate soft-wrap line pairs compiling as single paragraphs — preserved.
  • 299 unmarked Role/Function/Emotional Tone/Slogan/Biography/Associated Mascots labels (label + hard-break + value stat-block) — dominant mascot convention, not normalized.
  • 304 lines 23, 25 single trailing spaces — harmless residue; no trailing-whitespace cleaning per the rubric.
  • 299 line 30 "was this officially enough?" and 301 line 255 "til — archival voice, preserved.

Verification performed

  • Byte-level line-ending inspection of all verse regions in the six records (mid-paragraph no-break count: 0).
  • Compiled-article inspection of M-0301.html before and after: confirmed pre-edit lazy-continuation gluing (label inside <blockquote>; label + outcome + couplet inside final <li>) and correct detached <p>/<ul>/<blockquote> structure post-edit.
  • Compiled-article inspection of M-0298, M-0299, M-0300, M-0304: each renders exactly one <strong> pivot in the intended location; M-0297 (unchanged) recompiled clean.
  • BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed.
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after recount.

Unresolved follow-up

  • 301 indented limerick B-lines (lines 255–339): whether the printed-limerick indentation convention is sanctioned residue or should be normalized — maintainer decision (needs decision).
  • 301 line 60 relatedLorelog fused word — likely defect; left for maintainer call since wording is out of scope (needs decision).