Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 03: Second-Pass Review of Fourteen Records
Maintenance ID: 0.1.00233.lorelog-03-v2
Date: 2026-10-09
Scope: content/lorelog/ — the fourteen records assigned by workload issue #937 (LLG-0317-RLS through LLG-0328-MEC, snapshot 4e6a82e8)
What changed
- Read all fourteen assigned records in full, frontmatter through final verse tail, at snapshot
4e6a82e8(identical toorigin/mainat work time). Six records changed; eight were reviewed unchanged. LLG-0320-FRK: identifier → code span. The record's subject is a keyspace collision on one form number;32-A(×4) and32-A-R(×1) in the prose are now code spans. Form-title parentheticals left as prose.LLG-0323-LC04: record mention → wiki link.LLG-0323-ASD(line 25, the terminology revision this object descends from) andLLG-0820-MCR(line 77, the metrics-of-care experiment source) now resolve as[[canonical-id|label]]with source spelling preserved.LLG-0324-MAP: record mention → wiki link.LLG-0326-DXSandLLG-0382-BPDin the Doctrine Index Alignment paragraph (line 60) now link; both targets were already declared in this record's frontmatterrelations.LLG-0325-ORT: record mention → wiki link.LLG-0329-OIR(line 13) andLLG-0324-MAP(line 17) now link.LLG-0326-DXS: record mention → wiki link. The record is a comparative dossier whose prose is built from citing prior filings; all nine record-ID mentions (LLG-0072-SOMA,LLG-0103-COMA,LLG-0300-SC-X,LLG-0114-SOMA,LLG-0115-TNS,LLG-0220-UIS,LLG-0217-CNTR,LLG-0302-CNTR,LLG-0317-RLS) now link.LLG-0327-AVA: record mention → wiki link.LLG-0323-ASD(line 14) andLLG-0324-MAP(line 66) now link.- Recounted
content/changelog/source records at merge time — concurrent pass-2 slices (#951, #952, #953) landed their own dockets during review — and set the trunk'sCount:to the measured actual (189). README totals updated likewise to match source (2,394 pages, 11 trunks, 2,383 satellites).
What was deliberately left alone
- All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, headings and
{#...}anchors, tables, quoted/documentary material, and existing emphasis. - All verse: every haiku, limerick, and aphorism block, including the indented verse residue inside Related Aphorisms (
LLG-0321-DRTlines 38–42;LLG-0328-MEClines 30–46, whose recursive tail-eats-file stanza is the record's own joke and remains untouched). - The Brickys Filing Notes convention variance — fenced
mdinLLG-0317-RLS/LLG-0326-DXS, bare label-plus-list inLLG-0318-SRO/LLG-0320-FRK/LLG-0324-MAP,##heading inLLG-0327-AVA, absent entirely inLLG-0319-PAS. A corpus survey (16 plain-label, 2 fenced, 1 heading, 0 bold-label) showed no dominant target to normalize toward; the variance is residue and stays. LLG-0324-MAPline 62 self-citation(LLG-0324-MAP)— the link transform covers mentions of other records; a self-edge is not an evidence claim.AV-14 Nullseal Register(LLG-0323-LC04line 33) — a title mention, not an ID token; natural-language references are out of pass-2 scope.- "This cousin of 0323" (
LLG-0327-AVRline 139) — natural-language and genuinely ambiguous (twoLLG-0323-*records exist in this batch alone); left plain. - Form codes inside DXS cited-incident summaries (
SOMA‑72,COMA‑19,SOMA‑14,F17–F93,09‑I,23‑O,24‑O) — passing citations, not the record's subject; MAP's quoted sample language (Form 40-C,51-E-A,12-A) is documentary material. - MAP taxonomy acronyms (
CAAR,LCGU,STCP,AAOA) in inline prose — already carry bold run-in labels at their definition site; inline uses read as prose, not literals. LC-04object code throughoutLLG-0323-LC04— functions as the object's name in prose ("LC-04 remained in the UI"), not a literal needing code format.- All trailing-whitespace residue, including
LLG-0323-LC04lines 18, 25, 31, 46, 60, 68, 94, 103, 109 and elsewhere. No whitespace cleaning was run. LLG-0317-RLS,LLG-0318-SRO,LLG-0319-PAS,LLG-0321-DRT,LLG-0323-ASD,LLG-0326-DCB,LLG-0327-AVR,LLG-0328-MEC— reviewed unchanged; each already carries its earned pass-1 pivot or earns no pass-2 transform.
Verification performed
BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh— passed: graph diagnostics clean, all 17 new wiki links resolved, Cantilever compile succeeded, HTML ID audit 0 duplicates, verse residue check passed, filed certification passed.- Rendered-output spot check:
dist/cantilever/lorelog/LLG-0326-DXS.htmlemits<a href="LLG-NNNN-XXX.html">for all nine links;LLG-0323-LC04.htmlemits both;LLG-0320-FRK.htmlemits<code>32-A</code>×4 and<code>32-A-R</code>×1. python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py— PASS after count updates.
Unresolved follow-up
LLG-0318-SROline 13: "the archives newfound flexibility" reads as a dropped apostrophe (archive's). A word-level defect, not a formatting one — flagged for maintainer decision rather than silently corrected. Markedneeds decisionin the PR evidence table.- Issue #937's stated execution gate sequences this slice after the #934 pilot merge; the pilot remains open. This slice was dispatched with pre-allocated maintenance ID 0.1.00233 and is reported here for the record.