Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 03: Second-Pass Review of Fourteen Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00233.lorelog-03-v2 Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the fourteen records assigned by workload issue #937 (LLG-0317-RLS through LLG-0328-MEC, snapshot 4e6a82e8)

What changed

  • Read all fourteen assigned records in full, frontmatter through final verse tail, at snapshot 4e6a82e8 (identical to origin/main at work time). Six records changed; eight were reviewed unchanged.
  • LLG-0320-FRK: identifier → code span. The record's subject is a keyspace collision on one form number; 32-A (×4) and 32-A-R (×1) in the prose are now code spans. Form-title parentheticals left as prose.
  • LLG-0323-LC04: record mention → wiki link. LLG-0323-ASD (line 25, the terminology revision this object descends from) and LLG-0820-MCR (line 77, the metrics-of-care experiment source) now resolve as [[canonical-id|label]] with source spelling preserved.
  • LLG-0324-MAP: record mention → wiki link. LLG-0326-DXS and LLG-0382-BPD in the Doctrine Index Alignment paragraph (line 60) now link; both targets were already declared in this record's frontmatter relations.
  • LLG-0325-ORT: record mention → wiki link. LLG-0329-OIR (line 13) and LLG-0324-MAP (line 17) now link.
  • LLG-0326-DXS: record mention → wiki link. The record is a comparative dossier whose prose is built from citing prior filings; all nine record-ID mentions (LLG-0072-SOMA, LLG-0103-COMA, LLG-0300-SC-X, LLG-0114-SOMA, LLG-0115-TNS, LLG-0220-UIS, LLG-0217-CNTR, LLG-0302-CNTR, LLG-0317-RLS) now link.
  • LLG-0327-AVA: record mention → wiki link. LLG-0323-ASD (line 14) and LLG-0324-MAP (line 66) now link.
  • Recounted content/changelog/ source records at merge time — concurrent pass-2 slices (#951, #952, #953) landed their own dockets during review — and set the trunk's Count: to the measured actual (189). README totals updated likewise to match source (2,394 pages, 11 trunks, 2,383 satellites).

What was deliberately left alone

  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, headings and {#...} anchors, tables, quoted/documentary material, and existing emphasis.
  • All verse: every haiku, limerick, and aphorism block, including the indented verse residue inside Related Aphorisms (LLG-0321-DRT lines 38–42; LLG-0328-MEC lines 30–46, whose recursive tail-eats-file stanza is the record's own joke and remains untouched).
  • The Brickys Filing Notes convention variance — fenced md in LLG-0317-RLS/LLG-0326-DXS, bare label-plus-list in LLG-0318-SRO/LLG-0320-FRK/LLG-0324-MAP, ## heading in LLG-0327-AVA, absent entirely in LLG-0319-PAS. A corpus survey (16 plain-label, 2 fenced, 1 heading, 0 bold-label) showed no dominant target to normalize toward; the variance is residue and stays.
  • LLG-0324-MAP line 62 self-citation (LLG-0324-MAP) — the link transform covers mentions of other records; a self-edge is not an evidence claim.
  • AV-14 Nullseal Register (LLG-0323-LC04 line 33) — a title mention, not an ID token; natural-language references are out of pass-2 scope.
  • "This cousin of 0323" (LLG-0327-AVR line 139) — natural-language and genuinely ambiguous (two LLG-0323-* records exist in this batch alone); left plain.
  • Form codes inside DXS cited-incident summaries (SOMA‑72, COMA‑19, SOMA‑14, F17–F93, 09‑I, 23‑O, 24‑O) — passing citations, not the record's subject; MAP's quoted sample language (Form 40-C, 51-E-A, 12-A) is documentary material.
  • MAP taxonomy acronyms (CAAR, LCGU, STCP, AAOA) in inline prose — already carry bold run-in labels at their definition site; inline uses read as prose, not literals.
  • LC-04 object code throughout LLG-0323-LC04 — functions as the object's name in prose ("LC-04 remained in the UI"), not a literal needing code format.
  • All trailing-whitespace residue, including LLG-0323-LC04 lines 18, 25, 31, 46, 60, 68, 94, 103, 109 and elsewhere. No whitespace cleaning was run.
  • LLG-0317-RLS, LLG-0318-SRO, LLG-0319-PAS, LLG-0321-DRT, LLG-0323-ASD, LLG-0326-DCB, LLG-0327-AVR, LLG-0328-MEC — reviewed unchanged; each already carries its earned pass-1 pivot or earns no pass-2 transform.

Verification performed

  • BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: graph diagnostics clean, all 17 new wiki links resolved, Cantilever compile succeeded, HTML ID audit 0 duplicates, verse residue check passed, filed certification passed.
  • Rendered-output spot check: dist/cantilever/lorelog/LLG-0326-DXS.html emits <a href="LLG-NNNN-XXX.html"> for all nine links; LLG-0323-LC04.html emits both; LLG-0320-FRK.html emits <code>32-A</code> ×4 and <code>32-A-R</code> ×1.
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after count updates.

Unresolved follow-up

  • LLG-0318-SRO line 13: "the archives newfound flexibility" reads as a dropped apostrophe (archive's). A word-level defect, not a formatting one — flagged for maintainer decision rather than silently corrected. Marked needs decision in the PR evidence table.
  • Issue #937's stated execution gate sequences this slice after the #934 pilot merge; the pilot remains open. This slice was dispatched with pre-allocated maintenance ID 0.1.00233 and is reported here for the record.