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    Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 04: Second-Pass Review of Fourteen Records

    Maintenance ID: 0.1.00234.lorelog-04 Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the fourteen records assigned by workload issue #938 (LLG-0329-OIR, LLG-0330-TDE, LLG-0331-TPI, LLG-0332-SCD, LLG-0333-MEO, LLG-0334-CSI, LLG-0336-CSE, LLG-0338-SBI, LLG-0339-SIRC, LLG-0340-BPO, LLG-0341-LME, LLG-0350-DOGE-CHARTER, LLG-0351-DOGE-INTAKE, LLG-0352-DOGE-RUBRIC)

    What changed

    Pass-2 review under the merged "Pass 2 — rich structure" addendum. Read all fourteen assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including embedded aphorism, haiku, and limerick residue. Every assigned file was identical to snapshot 4e6a82e839fe56832a3d1c3fdd155487c16b002b at review time (HEAD of main equals the snapshot commit); no intervening diffs to disclose.

    • LLG-0329-OIR.md line 15: converted two parenthetical record-ID citations — (LLG-0324-MAP) and (LLG-0322-FTD) — into wiki links [[lorelog/LLG-0324-MAP|LLG-0324-MAP]] and [[lorelog/LLG-0322-FTD|LLG-0322-FTD]]. Both canonical IDs verified against target frontmatter; labels preserve source spelling.
    • LLG-0332-SCD.md line 34: Disposition: field fragment promoted to **Disposition:** run-in label. Existing lead-in wording only.
    • LLG-0339-SIRC.md: (LLG-0334-CSI) at line 12 and (LLG-0338-SBI) at line 72 converted to wiki links (both targets already carry relates_to edges in this record's frontmatter). Form codes COMA-07 (line 49) and SOMA-72 (line 80) converted to code spans.
    • LLG-0340-BPO.md line 56: LLG-0820-MCR converted to [[lorelog/LLG-0820-MCR|LLG-0820-MCR]]. Target frontmatter confirmed; the mention is an explicit ID citation in prose.
    • LLG-0341-LME.md: LLG-0019-COMA at line 53 converted to a wiki link ([[lorelog/LLG-0019-COMA|LLG-0019-COMA]]). Form numbers COMA-19 (line 45), 40-C and DS-404-ALPHA (line 57) converted to code spans — in-world form codes, not record citations.
    • LLG-0350-DOGE-CHARTER.md: Historical Charter Note: lead-in at line 12 promoted to **Historical Charter Note:** run-in label. Field name breedingProgram code-spanned at lines 30 and 95.
    • LLG-0351-DOGE-INTAKE.md: form numbers GEX-1T (line 25) and GEX-2R (line 134) code-spanned in body text.
    • LLG-0352-DOGE-RUBRIC.md line 43: GEX-2R code-spanned.
    • Recounted content/changelog/ source records, including this docket, and set the trunk's Count: to 186. README totals updated to match source: 2,391 pages, 11 trunks, 2,380 satellites.

    What was deliberately left alone

    • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, heading anchors ({#...}), stanza structure, indentation, two-space hard breaks, checkboxes, fill-in underscores, blockquotes, and all quoted/documentary material.
    • LLG-0330-TDE.md, LLG-0331-TPI.md, LLG-0333-MEO.md, LLG-0334-CSI.md: reviewed unchanged. Each is a single lead paragraph followed by embedded aphorism/haiku/limerick residue; no record-ID tokens, field fragments, or enumerations exist in the prose, and existing emphasis was already earned in pass 1.
    • LLG-0336-CSE.md: reviewed unchanged. Already structured (Observed Effects list, bold spans, italicized quoted phrases); quoted phrases at line 13 are in-scene quotation, not preserved-fragment blockquote material.
    • LLG-0339-SIRC.md line 133 self-mention LLG-0339-SIRC left plain (a self-referential wiki edge is not an evidence-layer claim) and "COMA-19" inside the quoted margin note at line 80 left plain (entity-like usage, not a form citation).
    • LLG-0341-LME.md DS-404-ALPHA was code-spanned, not linked: the sentence cites the in-world form, and although a record lorelog/DS-0404-ALPHA exists for that form, the mention is not a record citation. LC-04 (lines 66–72) left plain as an object designation rather than a literal identifier.
    • LLG-0350-DOGE-CHARTER.md heading at line 93 (## Relationship to breedingProgram (LLG-0375–0378)) left plain — code spans in headings risk anchor-slug drift, and LLG-0375–0378 is an ID range that cannot resolve to a single wiki target.
    • LLG-0338-SBI.md reviewed unchanged — see needs-decision below.
    • No :::note fences in the assigned set; the corpus-wide literal-fence question remains with its existing maintainer decision thread.

    Verification performed

    • ./bin/validate_graph.sh — Boris graph diagnostics plus full Cantilever compile; passed.
    • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after trunk count and README totals were set to actuals.
    • git diff on the eight changed records confirms Markdown-structure-only edits: wiki-link labels preserve source spelling, code spans wrap literal identifiers, run-in labels reuse existing lead-in words. No word, order, ID, or frontmatter changes.
    • Wiki-link targets verified against the frozen graph before editing: lorelog/LLG-0324-MAP, lorelog/LLG-0322-FTD, lorelog/LLG-0334-CSI, lorelog/LLG-0338-SBI, lorelog/LLG-0820-MCR, lorelog/LLG-0019-COMA all resolve.
    • Compiled dist/cantilever/ articles for all eight changed records inspected for rendering regressions; verse tails, hard breaks, and existing markup intact.

    Unresolved follow-up

    • needs decision — LLG-0338-SBI.md lines 60–68: the ## Interpretation Constraint Layer annex is kin to the boilerplate interpretation annexes the pass-2 rubric permits wrapping in <Details>/<Aside>. Not applied here: it would be the corpus's first <Details> component, the annex text is on-theme for this record (it asserts the limits of interpreting silence), and the deliberate residue stub at lines 70–72 ({#interpretation-constraint-layer-2} + ... + repeated constraint line, already judged intentional under docket 0.1.00150.lorelog-009) re-presents the same heading. Whether this annex should collapse is a maintainer call.