Presentation QA v2 — lorelog 05 (LLG-0354 through LLG-0367)

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00235.lorelog-05-v2 Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ (issue #939, fourteen records)

What changed

  • Pass-2 rich-structure review of fourteen lorelog records (LLG-0354 through LLG-0367), each read in full against the pass-2 addendum in docs/presentation-qa-baseline.md.
  • LLG-0354-DOGE-EDGE-CASES: breedingProgram field name to code span; Origin:/Delivery:/Residue:/Precedent: lead-ins to **Label:** run-ins; the EC-003 heading's parenthetical see LLG-0363-RAGE-MISIDENTIFICATION to [[lorelog/LLG-0363-RAGE-MISIDENTIFICATION|LLG-0363-RAGE-MISIDENTIFICATION]].
  • LLG-0355-GEX-2R: Certification Block bolded to match the record's own **Section A–D** pseudo-heading convention.
  • LLG-0356-DOGE-MEMO-FEELINGS: DOGE's formal position: lead-in to run-in label before the existing blockquote.
  • LLG-0362-RAGE-EXTRACTION: Record Note: lead-in to run-in label; Origin:/Agency:/Residue: test criteria to run-in labels.
  • LLG-0363-RAGE-MISIDENTIFICATION: body citation LLG-0354-DOGE-EDGE-CASES to [[lorelog/LLG-0354-DOGE-EDGE-CASES|LLG-0354-DOGE-EDGE-CASES]] (frontmatter relates_to for the same pair already existed); Kindy's margin note: lead-in to run-in label.
  • Nine records reviewed unchanged: LLG-0357, LLG-0358, LLG-0359, LLG-0360, LLG-0361, LLG-0364, LLG-0365, LLG-0366, LLG-0367 — each already expressed its implied structure (bold-label lists, blockquotes, earned pivots) or earned no allowed transform.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All ## Related * verse tails, including two-space hard breaks; the breedingProgram-adjacent occurrence inside LLG-0354's limerick tail.
  • Heading-embedded breedingProgram in LLG-0354's EC-002 heading: left plain; code spans inside headings were not exercised where the body already carries the token.
  • EC-001/EC-002/EC-003 case tokens in headings and prose: internal section nomenclature, not standalone record IDs.
  • GEX-2R in LLG-0359's observed-elements list: a form-number mention, not a canonical record-ID token; wiki-link scope requires the ID form.
  • "Window 3 guidance" in LLG-0356: natural-language reference without an ID token, out of scope for pass-2 link conversion.
  • Field lead-ins in LLG-0355 beyond Certification Block: sibling intake form LLG-0351 leaves the same labels plain; the form's structure is already expressed by its section pseudo-headings.
  • No words, ordering, frontmatter, IDs, or relations altered anywhere.

Verification performed

  • BORIS_BIN=~/.local/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed (boris check reports reference 2/2 edges resolved; full Cantilever compile clean; verse residue check, HTML ID audit, and proof certification all pass).
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after this docket and the matching trunk/README count updates.
  • Emitted HTML inspected for all five changed records: wiki links render as <a href> with label spelling preserved, heading slug ec-003-counterfactual-anger-see-llg-0363-rage-misidentification unchanged, run-in labels render as <strong> run-ins, verse hard breaks intact (<br /> preserved).

Unresolved follow-up

  • None. The two EC-003/EC-001 cross-record references now resolve as graph edges; the reciprocal heading link in LLG-0354 is the only heading-position wiki link in the corpus and was verified against the compiled output.