Presentation QA Lorelog v2-011: Second-Pass Review of 14 Records
Maintenance ID: 0.1.00241.lorelog-v2-011
Date: 2026-10-09
Scope: content/lorelog/ — the 14 records assigned by workload issue #945 (pass 2, rich structure)
What changed
Read all 14 assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including each record's Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue. All 14 files are byte-identical to snapshot 4e6a82e839fe56832a3d1c3fdd155487c16b002b (current main); nothing moved since the assignment was cut.
LLG-0450-SEAMS-PRESENT-TENSE.mdline 36:LLG-0451→[[lorelog/LLG-0451-JIGGLER-EMPATHEGY-BRIDGE|LLG-0451]]— the record's own Cross-reference: label already makes the citation; the link makes it navigable. Label preserves source spelling.LLG-0451-JIGGLER-EMPATHEGY-BRIDGE.md: ten ID-token citations converted to wiki links with labels preserving source spelling —(LLG-0450),(LLG-0811-EG),(FREF-0430-EASP)in the bridge paragraph (line 12); the*From LLG-0811-EG:*quote attributions (lines 22, 32, 69, 87);Key insight from LLG-0811-EG:(line 42);(FREF-0430-EASP)in the adaptation table (line 40); heading citationsLLG-0387-SURV-NOP(line 50) and(FREF-0430-EASP)(line 77). All targets verified against the graph; every edge is corroborated by the record's existingrelations.LLG-0452-SOMA-COMA-CHRONOLOGY.md: the synthesis index's ID tokens converted to wiki links — the eight bolded entry IDs in the Chronological Thread table (lines 22–29), the parenthetical(LLG-0339-SIRC)inside the LLG-0334-CSI outcome cell, theLLG-0300-SC-XandLLG-0339-SIRCmentions in Recurring Patterns (lines 38–39), and the three Cross-References IDs(FREF-0900-CCC),(LLG-0450-SEAMS-PRESENT-TENSE),(LLG-0115-TNS)(lines 54–56). The record's entire function is indexing these records; the links express what the prose already claims.LLG-04xx-CLIN-404.md: five existing incident lead-ins became**Label:**run-ins matching the record's own field-label style —**Context:**,**Preconditions:**,**Timeline:**,**Emergent artifact:**,**Containment actions:**(lines 50–65). The Closing Log's verbatim Bricky statement (line 100–101) became a>block under its existing**Bricky Goldbricksworth:**speaker label.LLG-0811-EG.md: the two boilerplate interpretation annexes wrapped in<Details>—summary="Interpretation Boundary Adjustment" id="interpretation-boundary-adjustment"andsummary="Visibility Exclusion Clarification" id="visibility-exclusion-clarification"— summaries reuse the existing##headings verbatim and the ids reproduce the auto-derived heading anchors. The trailingDoctrine note:paragraph stays inside the Visibility Exclusion annex it was filed under.LLG-0812-CTM.mdline 108:FREF-0822-ELRA→[[reference/FREF-0822-ELRA|FREF-0822-ELRA]]— the explanation-stack note cites the record by ID; target confirmed atcontent/reference/empathegy/fref-0822-elra.md.LLG-0820-MCR.mdline 18:Archive position (post-review annotation):→**Archive position (post-review annotation):**— the annotation lead-in the record already carried, bolded to match the sibling**Custody routing note:**/**Explanation stack note:**convention in LLG-0821-SCL and LLG-0812-CTM.LLG-0821-SCL.md: four ID-token citations linked —LLG-0321-DRT(line 48),LLG-0820-MCR(line 60),FREF-0635-WWLV(line 89),LLG-0864-WRC(line 97) — and the session identifierSCL-07(line 74) became a code span.LLG-0833-GTA.mdline 24:LLG-0377-GRAT→[[lorelog/LLG-0377-GRAT|LLG-0377-GRAT]]— "filed under" is an explicit record citation.
What was deliberately left alone
- All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags,
relations,{#...}heading anchors, quoted/documentary material, verse stanzas, indentation, and two-space hard breaks. No## Related *tail was touched. LLG-0819-K.mdreviewed unchanged: the record already spends its structure — bold**T-Minus**/**T-Zero**/**T-Plus**chronology labels (lines 15–21), bold observed-effect and departmental-response labels (24–31), and the0x00000000code span (lines 12, 15). Its empty## Related Haikussection (74–77) is residue consistent with the haikus collection.LLG-0822-RKI.mdreviewed unchanged: detection sequence (38–42), outcome lists, the redaction blockquote (78), and the classification bold (69) already carry the structure. The only ID token is the record's self-reference at line 102.LLG-0824-GBC.mdreviewed unchanged: lists and the dissent/response blockquotes (80–86) already carry it; the sole ID token is self-reference (102).LLG-0840-RCL.mdreviewed unchanged: the five### Rung N:headings, condition lists, and bold archive position (114) are already structural; sole ID token is self-reference (107).LLG-0842-PCL.mdreviewed unchanged: lists, the compression-sequence enumeration (57–61), witness blockquote (79), and**compensatory infrastructure**(91) already carry it; sole ID token is self-reference (107).DS-404-ALPHAmentions inLLG-04xx-CLIN-404.mdname the form artifact, not unambiguously the archive recordlorelog/DS-0404-ALPHA; left plain.SA-SS-TELinLLG-0811-EG.mdline 50 (inside the wrapped annex) names a suite, not a cited record ID; left plain.
Verification performed
BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/.local/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh— passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py— PASS: collection counts and README totals match Markdown source (changelog trunk recounted including this docket; README totals set to actual).git diff --word-diff=porcelainon the nine changed records confirms markup insertion only —[[id|label]]wrappers,**Label:**run-ins,<Details>/<Aside>tags, one>blockquote marker, one code span. No word, order, ID, frontmatter, or verse changes.- Compiled-article inspection in
dist/cantilever/lorelog/: every wiki link resolves to a real.htmlhref (zero literal[[in any changed page), both<details class="details">blocks compile with summaries and anchor-preserving ids, the Bricky statement renders as a<blockquote>under its speaker label,SCL-07renders as<code>, and verse<br>hard breaks are intact across changed and unchanged records alike. - Wiki-link targets verified before editing: all
lorelog/LLG-*targets,reference/FREF-0430-EASP,reference/FREF-0900-CCC,reference/FREF-0635-WWLV, andreference/FREF-0822-ELRA(content/reference/empathegy/fref-0822-elra.md) resolve to real canonical IDs.
Unresolved follow-up
- needs decision —
LLG-0833-GTA.mdline 15: "corrrelated" (presumed "correlated"), and line 25 runs two sentences together without punctuation ("...no capacity to change outcomes they merely acknowledged effort..."). Possible source typos; a presentation pass does not fix words. Left as-is for maintainer decision.