Presentation QA Lorelog v2-011: Second-Pass Review of 14 Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00241.lorelog-v2-011 Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the 14 records assigned by workload issue #945 (pass 2, rich structure)

What changed

Read all 14 assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including each record's Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue. All 14 files are byte-identical to snapshot 4e6a82e839fe56832a3d1c3fdd155487c16b002b (current main); nothing moved since the assignment was cut.

  • LLG-0450-SEAMS-PRESENT-TENSE.md line 36: LLG-0451 → [[lorelog/LLG-0451-JIGGLER-EMPATHEGY-BRIDGE|LLG-0451]] — the record's own Cross-reference: label already makes the citation; the link makes it navigable. Label preserves source spelling.
  • LLG-0451-JIGGLER-EMPATHEGY-BRIDGE.md: ten ID-token citations converted to wiki links with labels preserving source spelling — (LLG-0450), (LLG-0811-EG), (FREF-0430-EASP) in the bridge paragraph (line 12); the *From LLG-0811-EG:* quote attributions (lines 22, 32, 69, 87); Key insight from LLG-0811-EG: (line 42); (FREF-0430-EASP) in the adaptation table (line 40); heading citations LLG-0387-SURV-NOP (line 50) and (FREF-0430-EASP) (line 77). All targets verified against the graph; every edge is corroborated by the record's existing relations.
  • LLG-0452-SOMA-COMA-CHRONOLOGY.md: the synthesis index's ID tokens converted to wiki links — the eight bolded entry IDs in the Chronological Thread table (lines 22–29), the parenthetical (LLG-0339-SIRC) inside the LLG-0334-CSI outcome cell, the LLG-0300-SC-X and LLG-0339-SIRC mentions in Recurring Patterns (lines 38–39), and the three Cross-References IDs (FREF-0900-CCC), (LLG-0450-SEAMS-PRESENT-TENSE), (LLG-0115-TNS) (lines 54–56). The record's entire function is indexing these records; the links express what the prose already claims.
  • LLG-04xx-CLIN-404.md: five existing incident lead-ins became **Label:** run-ins matching the record's own field-label style — **Context:**, **Preconditions:**, **Timeline:**, **Emergent artifact:**, **Containment actions:** (lines 50–65). The Closing Log's verbatim Bricky statement (line 100–101) became a > block under its existing **Bricky Goldbricksworth:** speaker label.
  • LLG-0811-EG.md: the two boilerplate interpretation annexes wrapped in <Details> — summary="Interpretation Boundary Adjustment" id="interpretation-boundary-adjustment" and summary="Visibility Exclusion Clarification" id="visibility-exclusion-clarification" — summaries reuse the existing ## headings verbatim and the ids reproduce the auto-derived heading anchors. The trailing Doctrine note: paragraph stays inside the Visibility Exclusion annex it was filed under.
  • LLG-0812-CTM.md line 108: FREF-0822-ELRA → [[reference/FREF-0822-ELRA|FREF-0822-ELRA]] — the explanation-stack note cites the record by ID; target confirmed at content/reference/empathegy/fref-0822-elra.md.
  • LLG-0820-MCR.md line 18: Archive position (post-review annotation): → **Archive position (post-review annotation):** — the annotation lead-in the record already carried, bolded to match the sibling **Custody routing note:** / **Explanation stack note:** convention in LLG-0821-SCL and LLG-0812-CTM.
  • LLG-0821-SCL.md: four ID-token citations linked — LLG-0321-DRT (line 48), LLG-0820-MCR (line 60), FREF-0635-WWLV (line 89), LLG-0864-WRC (line 97) — and the session identifier SCL-07 (line 74) became a code span.
  • LLG-0833-GTA.md line 24: LLG-0377-GRAT → [[lorelog/LLG-0377-GRAT|LLG-0377-GRAT]] — "filed under" is an explicit record citation.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, {#...} heading anchors, quoted/documentary material, verse stanzas, indentation, and two-space hard breaks. No ## Related * tail was touched.
  • LLG-0819-K.md reviewed unchanged: the record already spends its structure — bold **T-Minus**/**T-Zero**/**T-Plus** chronology labels (lines 15–21), bold observed-effect and departmental-response labels (24–31), and the 0x00000000 code span (lines 12, 15). Its empty ## Related Haikus section (74–77) is residue consistent with the haikus collection.
  • LLG-0822-RKI.md reviewed unchanged: detection sequence (38–42), outcome lists, the redaction blockquote (78), and the classification bold (69) already carry the structure. The only ID token is the record's self-reference at line 102.
  • LLG-0824-GBC.md reviewed unchanged: lists and the dissent/response blockquotes (80–86) already carry it; the sole ID token is self-reference (102).
  • LLG-0840-RCL.md reviewed unchanged: the five ### Rung N: headings, condition lists, and bold archive position (114) are already structural; sole ID token is self-reference (107).
  • LLG-0842-PCL.md reviewed unchanged: lists, the compression-sequence enumeration (57–61), witness blockquote (79), and **compensatory infrastructure** (91) already carry it; sole ID token is self-reference (107).
  • DS-404-ALPHA mentions in LLG-04xx-CLIN-404.md name the form artifact, not unambiguously the archive record lorelog/DS-0404-ALPHA; left plain.
  • SA-SS-TEL in LLG-0811-EG.md line 50 (inside the wrapped annex) names a suite, not a cited record ID; left plain.

Verification performed

  • BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/.local/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS: collection counts and README totals match Markdown source (changelog trunk recounted including this docket; README totals set to actual).
  • git diff --word-diff=porcelain on the nine changed records confirms markup insertion only — [[id|label]] wrappers, **Label:** run-ins, <Details>/<Aside> tags, one > blockquote marker, one code span. No word, order, ID, frontmatter, or verse changes.
  • Compiled-article inspection in dist/cantilever/lorelog/: every wiki link resolves to a real .html href (zero literal [[ in any changed page), both <details class="details"> blocks compile with summaries and anchor-preserving ids, the Bricky statement renders as a <blockquote> under its speaker label, SCL-07 renders as <code>, and verse <br> hard breaks are intact across changed and unchanged records alike.
  • Wiki-link targets verified before editing: all lorelog/LLG-* targets, reference/FREF-0430-EASP, reference/FREF-0900-CCC, reference/FREF-0635-WWLV, and reference/FREF-0822-ELRA (content/reference/empathegy/fref-0822-elra.md) resolve to real canonical IDs.

Unresolved follow-up

  • needs decision — LLG-0833-GTA.md line 15: "corrrelated" (presumed "correlated"), and line 25 runs two sentences together without punctuation ("...no capacity to change outcomes they merely acknowledged effort..."). Possible source typos; a presentation pass does not fix words. Left as-is for maintainer decision.