Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 12: Read-First Review of Fourteen Records
Maintenance ID: 0.1.00242.lorelog-v2-012
Date: 2026-10-09
Scope: content/lorelog/ — the fourteen records assigned by workload issue #946 (LLG-0846-SIP, LLG-0851-CSI, LLG-0857-WLI, LLG-0861-ACS, LLG-0861-ARC, LLG-0861-FPP, LLG-0861-FRL, LLG-0863-MAS, LLG-0864-WRC, LLG-0870-EAS, LLG-0871-ASF, LLG-0890-EPS, LLG-08xx-EPS, LLG-BHDSS-TOAST)
What changed
- Read all fourteen assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including verse tails. All fourteen files match snapshot
4e6a82e839fe56832a3d1c3fdd155487c16b002b(the issue's snapshot commit is the currentmainHEAD); no intervening diffs. LLG-0851-CSI.mdline 110–111:FREF-0635-WWLVandLLG-0864-WRCmentions converted to[[reference/FREF-0635-WWLV|FREF-0635-WWLV]]and[[lorelog/LLG-0864-WRC|LLG-0864-WRC]]. Labels preserve source spelling; parenthetical glosses untouched.LLG-0857-WLI.mdlines 122, 127–128:FREF-0635-WWLV,LLG-0864-WRC, andFREF-0636-WCRmentions in the Routing note converted to wiki links.LLG-0861-ARC.mdlines 115, 121:FREF-0635-WWLVandFREF-0822-ELRAmentions converted to wiki links.LLG-0864-WRC.mdlines 135, 148: twoFREF-0635-WWLVmentions converted to wiki links.- Recounted
content/changelog/source records, including this docket, and set the trunk'sCount:to match. README totals updated to match source.
What was deliberately left alone
LLG-0846-SIP.mdunchanged: four enumerations already carry lists (lines 45–51, 65–70, 85–89, 97–101), the margin note is already a blockquote (lines 74–75), and the record already holds one earned bold pivot (line 57). The "False Rest Lantern" mention at line 91 carries no record-ID token — natural-language references are out of scope for pass-2 slices.LLG-0861-ACS.mdunchanged: lists, blockquote (lines 54–55), bold pivot (line 50), and## Archival Residueverse all already express the record's structure.LLG-0861-FPP.mdunchanged: lists, blockquote (line 47), bold pivot (line 65) already present. "Friendrick" (line 67) is a mascot-name mention without an ID token — left plain.LLG-0861-FRL.mdunchanged: enumerations including the numbered Lantern Effect sequence (lines 57–61) already structured; bold pivot at line 33.LLG-0863-MAS.mdunchanged: lists, numbered mechanism (lines 53–57), blockquote (line 79), bold pivot (line 91) already present.LLG-0870-EAS.mdunchanged: incident-path numbered list (lines 27–31), ticket-quote blockquote (line 40), phrasing lists already present. "Appendix IV, Subsection C" (line 31) is a section locator, not a code-span identifier.LLG-0871-ASF.mdunchanged:brand-neutral-softalready a code span (line 19), archivist quote already a blockquote (line 35), bold pivot at line 27.LLG-0890-EPS.mdunchanged: spoken/filed pair already blockquoted (lines 24, 27), bold pivot at line 36.LLG-08xx-EPS.mdunchanged: bare section-name style and!-- STOP LORELOG FILE --marker (line 87) preserved as residue; the pilot-debrief margin note at line 58 runs inline without quote delimiters and cannot be lifted into a blockquote without inventing punctuation — left plain.LC-04,COMA, and doctrine names carry no record-ID tokens.LLG-BHDSS-TOAST.mdunchanged:ERR_CONN_TIMEOUTand tag literals already code spans (line 26); the Field Clerk quote (lines 65–66) is speaker-attributed in-scene dialogue, which stays inline per the rubric.- All frontmatter, canonical IDs (including the
lorelog/LLG-0002/lorelog/LLG-0003path irregularities), titles, tags, relations,{#...}anchors, and every verse tail: stanza structure, indentation, and two-space hard breaks untouched. SOMA-72inLLG-0864-WRC.mdline 79 left bare, matching the corpus convention for form names (e.g.LLG-0072-SOMA.mdline 12,LLG-0339-SIRC.mdline 79).
Verification performed
./bin/validate_graph.sh— passed: Boris graph diagnostics (all nine new wiki links resolved against the frozen graph), full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, HTML ID audit, certification proof.python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py— PASS after updating the changelog trunk count and README totals.- Compiled HTML inspected for all four changed records: links render as
<a href>with source-spelling labels, no stray[[delimiters. Largest unchanged record (LLG-BHDSS-TOAST, rendered asLLG-0003.html) inspected: code spans, bold labels, and 167<br>verse hard breaks intact.
Unresolved follow-up
- Issue #946's execution gate sequences this slice after pilot #934; the pilot issue remained open and unmerged at dispatch time. The coordinator assigned this slice directly, so the work proceeded; flagging here for the maintainer's awareness.
- The inline pilot-debrief margin note in
LLG-08xx-EPS.mdline 58 (noted above) is flaggedneeds decisionin the PR table — a blockquote would be earned only if the maintainer rules the trailing sentence is narration rather than part of the note.