Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 12: Read-First Review of Fourteen Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00242.lorelog-v2-012 Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the fourteen records assigned by workload issue #946 (LLG-0846-SIP, LLG-0851-CSI, LLG-0857-WLI, LLG-0861-ACS, LLG-0861-ARC, LLG-0861-FPP, LLG-0861-FRL, LLG-0863-MAS, LLG-0864-WRC, LLG-0870-EAS, LLG-0871-ASF, LLG-0890-EPS, LLG-08xx-EPS, LLG-BHDSS-TOAST)

What changed

  • Read all fourteen assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including verse tails. All fourteen files match snapshot 4e6a82e839fe56832a3d1c3fdd155487c16b002b (the issue's snapshot commit is the current main HEAD); no intervening diffs.
  • LLG-0851-CSI.md line 110–111: FREF-0635-WWLV and LLG-0864-WRC mentions converted to [[reference/FREF-0635-WWLV|FREF-0635-WWLV]] and [[lorelog/LLG-0864-WRC|LLG-0864-WRC]]. Labels preserve source spelling; parenthetical glosses untouched.
  • LLG-0857-WLI.md lines 122, 127–128: FREF-0635-WWLV, LLG-0864-WRC, and FREF-0636-WCR mentions in the Routing note converted to wiki links.
  • LLG-0861-ARC.md lines 115, 121: FREF-0635-WWLV and FREF-0822-ELRA mentions converted to wiki links.
  • LLG-0864-WRC.md lines 135, 148: two FREF-0635-WWLV mentions converted to wiki links.
  • Recounted content/changelog/ source records, including this docket, and set the trunk's Count: to match. README totals updated to match source.

What was deliberately left alone

  • LLG-0846-SIP.md unchanged: four enumerations already carry lists (lines 45–51, 65–70, 85–89, 97–101), the margin note is already a blockquote (lines 74–75), and the record already holds one earned bold pivot (line 57). The "False Rest Lantern" mention at line 91 carries no record-ID token — natural-language references are out of scope for pass-2 slices.
  • LLG-0861-ACS.md unchanged: lists, blockquote (lines 54–55), bold pivot (line 50), and ## Archival Residue verse all already express the record's structure.
  • LLG-0861-FPP.md unchanged: lists, blockquote (line 47), bold pivot (line 65) already present. "Friendrick" (line 67) is a mascot-name mention without an ID token — left plain.
  • LLG-0861-FRL.md unchanged: enumerations including the numbered Lantern Effect sequence (lines 57–61) already structured; bold pivot at line 33.
  • LLG-0863-MAS.md unchanged: lists, numbered mechanism (lines 53–57), blockquote (line 79), bold pivot (line 91) already present.
  • LLG-0870-EAS.md unchanged: incident-path numbered list (lines 27–31), ticket-quote blockquote (line 40), phrasing lists already present. "Appendix IV, Subsection C" (line 31) is a section locator, not a code-span identifier.
  • LLG-0871-ASF.md unchanged: brand-neutral-soft already a code span (line 19), archivist quote already a blockquote (line 35), bold pivot at line 27.
  • LLG-0890-EPS.md unchanged: spoken/filed pair already blockquoted (lines 24, 27), bold pivot at line 36.
  • LLG-08xx-EPS.md unchanged: bare section-name style and !-- STOP LORELOG FILE -- marker (line 87) preserved as residue; the pilot-debrief margin note at line 58 runs inline without quote delimiters and cannot be lifted into a blockquote without inventing punctuation — left plain. LC-04, COMA, and doctrine names carry no record-ID tokens.
  • LLG-BHDSS-TOAST.md unchanged: ERR_CONN_TIMEOUT and tag literals already code spans (line 26); the Field Clerk quote (lines 65–66) is speaker-attributed in-scene dialogue, which stays inline per the rubric.
  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs (including the lorelog/LLG-0002 / lorelog/LLG-0003 path irregularities), titles, tags, relations, {#...} anchors, and every verse tail: stanza structure, indentation, and two-space hard breaks untouched.
  • SOMA-72 in LLG-0864-WRC.md line 79 left bare, matching the corpus convention for form names (e.g. LLG-0072-SOMA.md line 12, LLG-0339-SIRC.md line 79).

Verification performed

  • ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics (all nine new wiki links resolved against the frozen graph), full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, HTML ID audit, certification proof.
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after updating the changelog trunk count and README totals.
  • Compiled HTML inspected for all four changed records: links render as <a href> with source-spelling labels, no stray [[ delimiters. Largest unchanged record (LLG-BHDSS-TOAST, rendered as LLG-0003.html) inspected: code spans, bold labels, and 167 <br> verse hard breaks intact.

Unresolved follow-up

  • Issue #946's execution gate sequences this slice after pilot #934; the pilot issue remained open and unmerged at dispatch time. The coordinator assigned this slice directly, so the work proceeded; flagging here for the maintainer's awareness.
  • The inline pilot-debrief margin note in LLG-08xx-EPS.md line 58 (noted above) is flagged needs decision in the PR table — a blockquote would be earned only if the maintainer rules the trailing sentence is narration rather than part of the note.