Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 07: Rich-Structure Review of Fourteen Records
Maintenance ID: 0.1.00237.presentation-qa-lorelog-07
Date: 2026-10-09
Scope: content/lorelog/ — the fourteen records assigned by workload issue #941 (LLG-0382-BPD, LLG-0383-RAW, LLG-0384-CIR, LLG-0385-CEB, LLG-0385-SED, LLG-0386-LODGE-MERGE, LLG-0387-SURV-NOP, LLG-0388-EC-ORDER, LLG-0389-AKL, LLG-0389-MQM, LLG-0390-HAP, LLG-0390-KCL, LLG-0391-LAA, LLG-0391-RCD)
What changed
- Read all fourteen assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. Every file was byte-identical to snapshot
4e6a82e839fe56832a3d1c3fdd155487c16b002bat review time; no moves, removals, or identity changes. LLG-0382-BPD.md: converted nine unambiguous record-ID mentions in the dossier's evidence prose to[[canonical-id|source-spelling]]wiki links (LLG-0003-SVR, LLG-0012-A, LLG-0319-PAS, LLG-0375-BREED, LLG-0376 → lorelog/LLG-0376-BREED-GOV, LLG-0088-B, CREDITS-GTA → lorelog/LLG-0005, LLG-0811-EG, LLG-0820-MCR); code-spanned the literal schema field namesvibe,cosmicAlignment,snackPreference,caseNumber, and four body occurrences ofbreedingProgram/BreedingProgram.LLG-0385-CEB.md: wiki-linked two record mentions —DS-404-ALPHA→ lorelog/DS-0404-ALPHA (line 13) andEFA-1→ lorelog/LLG-0223-EFA (line 59). Labels preserve source spelling.LLG-0389-MQM.md: code-spanned the literal layer status tokensIn HonorandPresent(line 11); split the verbatim minute-book margin annotation at line 19 into a blockquote. No wording added at the seam.LLG-0390-KCL.md: code-spanned the three literal ledger status values in Sister Casserole's audit list —prepared by,prepared from the card of,prepared in honor of(lines 24–26).LLG-0391-LAA.md: split the verbatim handwritten noteApproved at lunch.into a blockquote (lines 14–16); code-spanned the luncheon-template field namesreception summaryanddisposition(line 30).- Five records changed, nine reviewed unchanged. Totals reconcile against the fourteen-file assignment.
What was deliberately left alone
- All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, status fields, tags, relations,
{#...}heading anchors, list structures already present, existing bold spans, quoted/documentary material, verse stanzas, two-space hard breaks, and double-blank-line residue spacing — across all fourteen records. - Form designations used as names (
Form 12‑A,Form 88‑B,Form AR-Null,divergence protocol L-17,Packet CEP,CEPs) — left plain; the code-span transform covers literal identifiers, and these read as titles in prose. LLG-0383-RAW,LLG-0384-CIR,LLG-0385-SED,LLG-0386-LODGE-MERGE,LLG-0387-SURV-NOP,LLG-0388-EC-ORDER,LLG-0389-AKL,LLG-0390-HAP,LLG-0391-RCD— reviewed unchanged. Each already carries the structure its content implies (status/enumeration lists and earned bold), or its enumerations are rhetorical triads and woven prose that the rubric does not permit splitting.- No new emphasis anywhere. Pass-1 already evaluated bold pivots for this slice; pass-2 emphasis remains uncapped but was not earned on a second read.
LLG-0382-BPDheading## The breedingProgram emerges(line 32) left plain — code-spanning inside a heading risks the generated anchor for no presentational gain.- The
LLG-0376link is a partial-ID mention; it resolves unambiguously because onlylorelog/LLG-0376-BREED-GOVcarries that prefix and the record's ownrelationsalready cite it.CREDITS-GTApreserves source spelling while targeting canonicallorelog/LLG-0005(path ≠ ID residue in the corpus). - Frontmatter
relationsuntouched.LLG-0382-BPD's body cites more records than its relations list — a curation question for the maintainer, not a formatting one.
Verification performed
git diffon the five changed records confirms Markdown structure only; stripping**/`/>/[[|]]leaves every changed line byte-identical to its source.python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py— PASS after this docket: changelog declared 186, actual 186; source 2,391 pages / 11 trunks / 2,380 satellites; README totals updated to match.BORIS_BIN=<local boris> ./bin/validate_graph.sh— see PR body for exact outcome, including wiki-link resolution against the frozen graph.- Compiled-article inspection of the changed records plus one unchanged control — see PR body for exact pages and results.
Unresolved follow-up
LLG-0382-BPDbody prose cites records absent from itsrelations(LLG-0003-SVR, LLG-0012-A, LLG-0319-PAS, LLG-0088-B, lorelog/LLG-0005, LLG-0811-EG, LLG-0820-MCR). The wiki links now carry the reference edges in-body; whether frontmatter relations should mirror them is a maintainer call, recorded here rather than made.