Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 07: Rich-Structure Review of Fourteen Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00237.presentation-qa-lorelog-07 Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the fourteen records assigned by workload issue #941 (LLG-0382-BPD, LLG-0383-RAW, LLG-0384-CIR, LLG-0385-CEB, LLG-0385-SED, LLG-0386-LODGE-MERGE, LLG-0387-SURV-NOP, LLG-0388-EC-ORDER, LLG-0389-AKL, LLG-0389-MQM, LLG-0390-HAP, LLG-0390-KCL, LLG-0391-LAA, LLG-0391-RCD)

What changed

  • Read all fourteen assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. Every file was byte-identical to snapshot 4e6a82e839fe56832a3d1c3fdd155487c16b002b at review time; no moves, removals, or identity changes.
  • LLG-0382-BPD.md: converted nine unambiguous record-ID mentions in the dossier's evidence prose to [[canonical-id|source-spelling]] wiki links (LLG-0003-SVR, LLG-0012-A, LLG-0319-PAS, LLG-0375-BREED, LLG-0376 → lorelog/LLG-0376-BREED-GOV, LLG-0088-B, CREDITS-GTA → lorelog/LLG-0005, LLG-0811-EG, LLG-0820-MCR); code-spanned the literal schema field names vibe, cosmicAlignment, snackPreference, caseNumber, and four body occurrences of breedingProgram/BreedingProgram.
  • LLG-0385-CEB.md: wiki-linked two record mentions — DS-404-ALPHA → lorelog/DS-0404-ALPHA (line 13) and EFA-1 → lorelog/LLG-0223-EFA (line 59). Labels preserve source spelling.
  • LLG-0389-MQM.md: code-spanned the literal layer status tokens In Honor and Present (line 11); split the verbatim minute-book margin annotation at line 19 into a blockquote. No wording added at the seam.
  • LLG-0390-KCL.md: code-spanned the three literal ledger status values in Sister Casserole's audit list — prepared by, prepared from the card of, prepared in honor of (lines 24–26).
  • LLG-0391-LAA.md: split the verbatim handwritten note Approved at lunch. into a blockquote (lines 14–16); code-spanned the luncheon-template field names reception summary and disposition (line 30).
  • Five records changed, nine reviewed unchanged. Totals reconcile against the fourteen-file assignment.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, status fields, tags, relations, {#...} heading anchors, list structures already present, existing bold spans, quoted/documentary material, verse stanzas, two-space hard breaks, and double-blank-line residue spacing — across all fourteen records.
  • Form designations used as names (Form 12‑A, Form 88‑B, Form AR-Null, divergence protocol L-17, Packet CEP, CEPs) — left plain; the code-span transform covers literal identifiers, and these read as titles in prose.
  • LLG-0383-RAW, LLG-0384-CIR, LLG-0385-SED, LLG-0386-LODGE-MERGE, LLG-0387-SURV-NOP, LLG-0388-EC-ORDER, LLG-0389-AKL, LLG-0390-HAP, LLG-0391-RCD — reviewed unchanged. Each already carries the structure its content implies (status/enumeration lists and earned bold), or its enumerations are rhetorical triads and woven prose that the rubric does not permit splitting.
  • No new emphasis anywhere. Pass-1 already evaluated bold pivots for this slice; pass-2 emphasis remains uncapped but was not earned on a second read.
  • LLG-0382-BPD heading ## The breedingProgram emerges (line 32) left plain — code-spanning inside a heading risks the generated anchor for no presentational gain.
  • The LLG-0376 link is a partial-ID mention; it resolves unambiguously because only lorelog/LLG-0376-BREED-GOV carries that prefix and the record's own relations already cite it. CREDITS-GTA preserves source spelling while targeting canonical lorelog/LLG-0005 (path ≠ ID residue in the corpus).
  • Frontmatter relations untouched. LLG-0382-BPD's body cites more records than its relations list — a curation question for the maintainer, not a formatting one.

Verification performed

  • git diff on the five changed records confirms Markdown structure only; stripping **/`/>/[[|]] leaves every changed line byte-identical to its source.
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after this docket: changelog declared 186, actual 186; source 2,391 pages / 11 trunks / 2,380 satellites; README totals updated to match.
  • BORIS_BIN=<local boris> ./bin/validate_graph.sh — see PR body for exact outcome, including wiki-link resolution against the frozen graph.
  • Compiled-article inspection of the changed records plus one unchanged control — see PR body for exact pages and results.

Unresolved follow-up

  • LLG-0382-BPD body prose cites records absent from its relations (LLG-0003-SVR, LLG-0012-A, LLG-0319-PAS, LLG-0088-B, lorelog/LLG-0005, LLG-0811-EG, LLG-0820-MCR). The wiki links now carry the reference edges in-body; whether frontmatter relations should mirror them is a maintainer call, recorded here rather than made.