Presentation QA Lorelog 08

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00238.lorelog-08 Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ — 14 records (LLG-0392-RCS through LLG-0401-GLP, issue #942 assignment)

What changed

Pass-2 (rich structure) presentation review of the lorelog-08 slice. Fourteen records read in full; eight earned transforms, six reviewed unchanged.

  • LLG-0392-RCS, LLG-0395-MSS, LLG-0397-SBF: the parallel "traced/performed/reconstructed ... through/using/from" evidence sentences split into verbatim item lists, matching the comma/and item style already used in LLG-0392-SGL's consensus list.
  • LLG-0399-OCS: seven literal record-ID mentions became wiki links (six edit sites) — FREF-0290-OCVH, LLG-0391-LAA (×2), LLG-0397-SBF (×2), FREF-0270-BMDC, LLG-0400-CMA-TSP — labels preserving source spelling including the record's non-breaking hyphens. Self-references to OCS-0399/CMA-TSP left plain.
  • LLG-0400-CMA-TSP: Bricky's margin-note lead-ins (Summary:, Trauma:, Goals:, Quirks:) became run-in bold labels; the prose mention of companion case LLG-0399-OCS became a wiki link.
  • LLG-0400-SCAS: cloned form numbers SOMA-14, 51-E, SOMA-72, COMA-19 (forms enumeration and the later SOMA-14 mention) became code spans.
  • LLG-0400-TRIAD: the three bolded member-record IDs became wiki links inside the existing bold (LLG-0401-GLP, LLG-0402-GMP, LLG-0403-WBA).
  • LLG-0401-GLP: the Finding: lead-in became a run-in label; UNSURE kept its existing bold.

Reviewed unchanged: LLG-0392-SGL, LLG-0393-BDA, LLG-0393-RBR, LLG-0394-PRS, LLG-0396-MSP, LLG-0398-CCO — their enumerations are already lists and no remaining prose runs earned a transform.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All words, ordering, frontmatter, IDs, tags, relations, titles, and every ## Related * verse tail, including the two terminal limerick stanzas in LLG-0401-GLP that duplicate earlier stanzas — intentional residue.
  • Stray --- separators ahead of the verse tails in LLG-0392-SGL (line 23) and LLG-0393-RBR (line 24) — pre-existing markup irregularity, preserved.
  • LLG-0400-SCAS line ~200: (see LLG-0000-NULL) references no record in the graph. Left plain — a null pointer to a null incident is on-brand residue, not a defect; flagged for maintainer awareness rather than filed as needs-decision.
  • SA‑SS‑TEL (SCAS) and mascot designations (LC-04, BX-6, LX-2, AC-11) are natural-language node/name references, not canonical ID tokens — out of scope for the wiki-link transform.
  • Quoted artifact inscriptions (save the good ribbon, Handle as shared certainty, We are basically there, As a former) left unmarked, matching corpus convention for such phrases.
  • Directive/subsystem acronyms (TNS, SBI, CSI, SIRC, MFX, C.U.N.T.I.E.R., FeelingSeeder) left plain — names, not document codes.
  • Banner phrases in LLG-0393-BDA/LLG-0393-RBR left unmarked; italicizing quoted stitch-text would be emphasis for decoration, not structure.

Verification performed

  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py: PASS after count updates.
  • ./bin/validate_graph.sh: passed — Boris graph diagnostics, verse residue check, HTML ID audit (0 duplicates), filed certification.
  • Compiled output inspected for all eight changed records: wiki links resolve to lorelog/LLG-*.html / reference/FREF-*.html targets, **[[id|label]]** renders as linked strong text, code spans and new lists render correctly, and the GLP checkbox list/Finding: run-in are intact.

Unresolved follow-up

  • Issue #942's gate cites pilot #934, which was still open and unmerged at the time this slice was worked; the assignment was released by the coordinator regardless. Recorded here so the sequencing decision is auditable.
  • LLG-0000-NULL has no record; if maintainers later create one, the SCAS mention becomes a link candidate on a future pass.