Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 14: Rich-Structure Review of Two Records
Maintenance ID: 0.1.00244.presentation-qa-lorelog-14
Date: 2026-10-09
Scope: content/lorelog/ — the two records assigned by workload issue #948 (TSA-SESSION-SCHEDULE.md = lorelog/LLG-0013, map-inc-14.md = lorelog/LLG-0014)
What changed
- Read both assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. Both files were byte-identical to snapshot
4e6a82e839fe56832a3d1c3fdd155487c16b002bat review time; no moves, removals, or identity changes. Branch mergedorigin/main(5d7de430) before editing; the only intervening lorelog changes were the lorelog-07 records, which do not overlap this assignment. TSA-SESSION-SCHEDULE.md: converted the record's existing field-fragment lead-ins to**Label:**run-ins —**Materials:**and**Exercise:**in all eight sessions (lines 13–69), plus the per-session third field (**Note:**line 15,**Debrief:**line 21,**Outcome:**line 31,**Trainer note:**line 37,**Observation:**line 47,**Question (rhetorical):**line 53,**Reflection:**line 63,**Final instruction:**line 69) and**Margin note:**at line 86 ahead of its blockquote. Twenty-five labels; label text preserved verbatim. The transform is earned by the record's form structure and matches the- **Input:**/- **Process:**/- **Output:**list convention already used across the mascots collection and the**Outcome:**/**Mantra:**stand-alone labels inLLG-EL-0x7EandLLG-DMAIC-RITE.map-inc-14.md: reviewed unchanged. Body already expresses its implied structure — the three-item enumeration is already a list, the boilerplate comment is already a blockquote, and the procedural-verdict line already carries the record's one bold pivot. CAAR/AAOA/LCGU/MAP/C.U.N.T.I.E.R. are classification and system acronyms used as prose nouns, not literal identifier tokens; code-spanning was considered and declined per "when in doubt, leave plain." The 37%/0% metrics contrast was considered for emphasis and declined — the existing bold verdict already carries the record's landing.- One record changed, one reviewed unchanged. Totals reconcile against the two-file assignment.
What was deliberately left alone
- All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, status, tags,
relations,{#...-2}heading anchors, existing bold spans (**Session …**headers,**No further explanation is filed.**, the map-inc-14 verdict line), the existing margin-note blockquote, quoted/documentary material, and every Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks verse tail including stanza structure and two-space hard breaks. - The six
[^1]footnote markers inmap-inc-14.md— no[^1]:definition exists in the file. Already flagged needs decision under 0.1.00218.reference-016 as part of the MAP-Annex dangling-marker cluster (footnotes to absent referents); not re-flagged, not edited. - "present, excused, or deferred presence" (line 75) — a rhetorical triad in prose, not an enumeration; left inline.
- "Session D1" mention at line 84 — a session name, not a literal identifier token; left plain.
- No new emphasis added in either record.
Verification performed
git diffon the changed record confirms Markdown structure only; stripping**leaves every changed line byte-identical to its source.python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.pyafter mergingorigin/mainand adding this docket — see PR body for exact outcome.BORIS_BIN=<local boris> ./bin/validate_graph.sh— see PR body for exact outcome.- Compiled-article inspection of the changed record and the unchanged
map-inc-14.mdcontrol — see PR body for exact pages and results.
Unresolved follow-up
TSA-SESSION-SCHEDULE.mdline 84: "An asterisk appears next to Session D1 on three separate weeks" — no asterisk appears anywhere in the extract. The record is titled "(Extract)" and taggedpartial-record, so the absent marks are plausibly deliberate residue; flagged needs decision rather than normalized or annotated.- The MAP-Annex dangling
[^1]pattern flagged under 0.1.00218.reference-016 remains open;map-inc-14.mdis part of that cluster.