Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 06: Rich-Structure Review of Fourteen Records
Maintenance ID: 0.1.00236.presentation-qa-lorelog-v2-06
Date: 2026-10-09
Scope: content/lorelog/ — the fourteen records assigned by workload issue #940 (LLG-0368-RAGE-AQ through LLG-0381-OPTOUT)
What changed
- Read all fourteen assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. The working tree was already at the issue snapshot (
4e6a82e8=origin/main), so no intervening diffs required rereads. LLG-0368-RAGE-AQ.mdline 13: italicized the verbatim unsanctioned filer note I know what a graph is and that is not what happened to me — quoted documentary material the record itself flags as repeatedly cited. Emphasis only.LLG-0369-DOGE-SWAB.mdline 13: italicized the use-mention weather (the word-as-word object of Bricky's objection). Line 32: converted the bulletin's verbatim standard reminder to a blockquote — already introduced as quotation by "the standard reminder:". Zero word changes.LLG-0370-XEV.mdline 23: code-spannedB-4A, the routing-state code in the comparative table's RAGE column. The limerick's "RAGE: B-4A." (line 126) is protected verse and stays plain.LLG-0373-DOGE-W5.mdline 26: converted the verbatim cover-sheet text to a blockquote — introduced as quotation by "a manual cover sheet reading". Zero word changes.LLG-0375-BREED.md: code-spanned the two remaining barebreedingProgramfield mentions (lines 26, 44) to match the record's own convention at lines 13/20, and code-spanned theHUMAN-ORIGINtag literal at line 18.LLG-0376-BREED-GOV.md: code-spannedbreedingProgramat body lines 12, 25, 30, 43. The two occurrences inside the Related Aphorisms tail (lines 56, 64) are protected residue and stay plain.LLG-0377-GRAT.md: code-spannedbreedingProgramat lines 28 (inside the quoted log string) and 39, consistent with the record's existinggratitudeBiascode span at line 41.LLG-0378-WFA.md: code-spannedLITH-PLAN/ALOC-03(lines 13, 33),HTTP 200(line 31),gratitudeBias(line 35), andbreedingProgram(lines 35, 48, 62). The ALL-CAPS category literals (FIELD-OPERATIVE, MAINTENANCE-UNIT, ADMIN-CLERK, UNDECLARED) are already structurally set off as list items and stay plain.LLG-0379-ROBOT-MEMO.md: converted "incident LLG-0378-WFA" at line 12 to[[lorelog/LLG-0378-WFA|LLG-0378-WFA]]— target confirmed against that record'sid:frontmatter; label preserves source spelling. Code-spannedCOORD-CLUSTER/SE-Δ(line 12), theCOAUTHOR/CONSUMERclassification literals (lines 36, 56 ×2), andbreedingProgram(lines 22, 40, 47, 56, 64). Promoted the existing lead-in "Internal discrepancy note:" at line 56 to a**Label:**run-in.PENDINGstays prose.LLG-0380-MATCH.md: converted "LLG-0377-GRAT" at line 22 to[[lorelog/LLG-0377-GRAT|LLG-0377-GRAT]]— canonicalid:confirmed. Code-spannedbreedingProgramat lines 12, 16, 55 andBreedingProgram(sentence-initial capital preserved) at line 77.LLG-0381-OPTOUT.md: code-spannedbreedingProgramat lines 12, 26, 42.- Added this docket; after merging
origin/main(which landed dockets0.1.00231,0.1.00237,0.1.00240from concurrent v2 slices), recountedcontent/changelog/to 189 and set README totals to actuals: 2,394 pages, 11 trunks, 2,383 satellites.
What was deliberately left alone
- All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, heading anchors, verse stanzas, indentation, two-space hard breaks, and the
## Related *residue tails in every record — including everybreedingProgram/COAUTHOR/B-4Aoccurrence inside verse or residue text. LLG-0371-BAIT-B2B.mdreviewed unchanged:B-2Bfunctions as the record's subject name, not a field literal ("when in doubt, leave plain"), and the record already carries its earned bold pivot (line 13) and indicator list.LLG-0372-BAIT-B5.mdreviewed unchanged: the line-11 comma run enumerates example mirror surfaces rather than discrete items — rhetorical exemplification, not an enumeration — and the record already has its bold pivot (line 13) and indicator list.LLG-0374-DOGE-LA.mdreviewed unchanged: the four evidence classes already exist as a run-in-labelled list (lines 19–22) mirroring the prose at line 13. TheGEX-2Rtoken at line 11 names a resubmission class, not an unambiguous record citation; the nearest canonical ID (aphorisms/APH-LLG-0355-GEX-2R) does not match the token's spelling, so no wiki link was made.- ALL-CAPS status words treated as prose, not literals:
RESOLVED/STABLE(LLG-0377),UNRESOLVABLE(LLG-0376),PENDING(LLG-0379),ACKNOWLEDGED — CONTINUATION PENDING(already a blockquote in LLG-0381),MN-O(inside an existing bold run-in, LLG-0368). - Pre-existing formatting untouched:
**SIMULATOR WEATHER ADVISORY**(LLG-0369),**Intent to Co-Exist**and**REFUSAL RECEIVED; STATUS UNCHANGED**(LLG-0381), existing blockquotes in LLG-0375/0376/0379/0380/0381, and**rotAffinity**(LLG-0380 line 23 — already bold; not converted to a code span).
Verification performed
BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh— passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.git diffreview: only emphasis markers, code spans, blockquote markers, and two[[...]]wiki links differ; no word, order, ID, frontmatter, link-target, or whitespace changes.- Compiled-article inspection in
dist/cantilever/lorelog/: both wiki links resolve (<a href="LLG-0378-WFA.html">LLG-0378-WFA</a>,<a href="LLG-0377-GRAT.html">LLG-0377-GRAT</a>); blockquotes render in LLG-0369/0373; every new<code>span verified per record against the source diff. - Served
dist/cantileverlocally and previewed: LLG-0379-ROBOT-MEMO (largest record, 266 lines) at 1280×800 desktop and 430×932 mobile — wiki link, code spans, run-in label, and Kindy's blockquote all render with no console or network errors; LLG-0369-DOGE-SWAB blockquote/italic and unchanged LLG-0374-DOGE-LA verified in the DOM at 430×932. python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py— PASS after updating the changelog trunk count and README totals.
Unresolved follow-up
- No
needs decisionitems. TheGEX-2Rmention in LLG-0374 was evaluated for the record-mention transform and left plain for the reason above; flagging it here so the decision is on record.