Presentation QA v2 Lorelog 06: Rich-Structure Review of Fourteen Records

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00236.presentation-qa-lorelog-v2-06 Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the fourteen records assigned by workload issue #940 (LLG-0368-RAGE-AQ through LLG-0381-OPTOUT)

What changed

  • Read all fourteen assigned records in full, frontmatter through final line, including the Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks residue in each. The working tree was already at the issue snapshot (4e6a82e8 = origin/main), so no intervening diffs required rereads.
  • LLG-0368-RAGE-AQ.md line 13: italicized the verbatim unsanctioned filer note I know what a graph is and that is not what happened to me — quoted documentary material the record itself flags as repeatedly cited. Emphasis only.
  • LLG-0369-DOGE-SWAB.md line 13: italicized the use-mention weather (the word-as-word object of Bricky's objection). Line 32: converted the bulletin's verbatim standard reminder to a blockquote — already introduced as quotation by "the standard reminder:". Zero word changes.
  • LLG-0370-XEV.md line 23: code-spanned B-4A, the routing-state code in the comparative table's RAGE column. The limerick's "RAGE: B-4A." (line 126) is protected verse and stays plain.
  • LLG-0373-DOGE-W5.md line 26: converted the verbatim cover-sheet text to a blockquote — introduced as quotation by "a manual cover sheet reading". Zero word changes.
  • LLG-0375-BREED.md: code-spanned the two remaining bare breedingProgram field mentions (lines 26, 44) to match the record's own convention at lines 13/20, and code-spanned the HUMAN-ORIGIN tag literal at line 18.
  • LLG-0376-BREED-GOV.md: code-spanned breedingProgram at body lines 12, 25, 30, 43. The two occurrences inside the Related Aphorisms tail (lines 56, 64) are protected residue and stay plain.
  • LLG-0377-GRAT.md: code-spanned breedingProgram at lines 28 (inside the quoted log string) and 39, consistent with the record's existing gratitudeBias code span at line 41.
  • LLG-0378-WFA.md: code-spanned LITH-PLAN/ALOC-03 (lines 13, 33), HTTP 200 (line 31), gratitudeBias (line 35), and breedingProgram (lines 35, 48, 62). The ALL-CAPS category literals (FIELD-OPERATIVE, MAINTENANCE-UNIT, ADMIN-CLERK, UNDECLARED) are already structurally set off as list items and stay plain.
  • LLG-0379-ROBOT-MEMO.md: converted "incident LLG-0378-WFA" at line 12 to [[lorelog/LLG-0378-WFA|LLG-0378-WFA]] — target confirmed against that record's id: frontmatter; label preserves source spelling. Code-spanned COORD-CLUSTER/SE-Δ (line 12), the COAUTHOR/CONSUMER classification literals (lines 36, 56 ×2), and breedingProgram (lines 22, 40, 47, 56, 64). Promoted the existing lead-in "Internal discrepancy note:" at line 56 to a **Label:** run-in. PENDING stays prose.
  • LLG-0380-MATCH.md: converted "LLG-0377-GRAT" at line 22 to [[lorelog/LLG-0377-GRAT|LLG-0377-GRAT]] — canonical id: confirmed. Code-spanned breedingProgram at lines 12, 16, 55 and BreedingProgram (sentence-initial capital preserved) at line 77.
  • LLG-0381-OPTOUT.md: code-spanned breedingProgram at lines 12, 26, 42.
  • Added this docket; after merging origin/main (which landed dockets 0.1.00231, 0.1.00237, 0.1.00240 from concurrent v2 slices), recounted content/changelog/ to 189 and set README totals to actuals: 2,394 pages, 11 trunks, 2,383 satellites.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, tags, relations, heading anchors, verse stanzas, indentation, two-space hard breaks, and the ## Related * residue tails in every record — including every breedingProgram/COAUTHOR/B-4A occurrence inside verse or residue text.
  • LLG-0371-BAIT-B2B.md reviewed unchanged: B-2B functions as the record's subject name, not a field literal ("when in doubt, leave plain"), and the record already carries its earned bold pivot (line 13) and indicator list.
  • LLG-0372-BAIT-B5.md reviewed unchanged: the line-11 comma run enumerates example mirror surfaces rather than discrete items — rhetorical exemplification, not an enumeration — and the record already has its bold pivot (line 13) and indicator list.
  • LLG-0374-DOGE-LA.md reviewed unchanged: the four evidence classes already exist as a run-in-labelled list (lines 19–22) mirroring the prose at line 13. The GEX-2R token at line 11 names a resubmission class, not an unambiguous record citation; the nearest canonical ID (aphorisms/APH-LLG-0355-GEX-2R) does not match the token's spelling, so no wiki link was made.
  • ALL-CAPS status words treated as prose, not literals: RESOLVED/STABLE (LLG-0377), UNRESOLVABLE (LLG-0376), PENDING (LLG-0379), ACKNOWLEDGED — CONTINUATION PENDING (already a blockquote in LLG-0381), MN-O (inside an existing bold run-in, LLG-0368).
  • Pre-existing formatting untouched: **SIMULATOR WEATHER ADVISORY** (LLG-0369), **Intent to Co-Exist** and **REFUSAL RECEIVED; STATUS UNCHANGED** (LLG-0381), existing blockquotes in LLG-0375/0376/0379/0380/0381, and **rotAffinity** (LLG-0380 line 23 — already bold; not converted to a code span).

Verification performed

  • BORIS_BIN=/Users/tbuddy/dev/filed.fyi/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile, verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.
  • git diff review: only emphasis markers, code spans, blockquote markers, and two [[...]] wiki links differ; no word, order, ID, frontmatter, link-target, or whitespace changes.
  • Compiled-article inspection in dist/cantilever/lorelog/: both wiki links resolve (<a href="LLG-0378-WFA.html">LLG-0378-WFA</a>, <a href="LLG-0377-GRAT.html">LLG-0377-GRAT</a>); blockquotes render in LLG-0369/0373; every new <code> span verified per record against the source diff.
  • Served dist/cantilever locally and previewed: LLG-0379-ROBOT-MEMO (largest record, 266 lines) at 1280×800 desktop and 430×932 mobile — wiki link, code spans, run-in label, and Kindy's blockquote all render with no console or network errors; LLG-0369-DOGE-SWAB blockquote/italic and unchanged LLG-0374-DOGE-LA verified in the DOM at 430×932.
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after updating the changelog trunk count and README totals.

Unresolved follow-up

  • No needs decision items. The GEX-2R mention in LLG-0374 was evaluated for the record-mention transform and left plain for the reason above; flagging it here so the decision is on record.