Presentation QA v2 — lorelog 09: 14 records reviewed, 7 changed

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00239.presentation-qa-v2-lorelog-09 Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ (LLG-0401-SCAS-ECHO through LLG-0408-DTS-DEP), content/changelog/

Second-pass ("rich structure") presentation review of the 14 lorelog records assigned by issue #943 at snapshot 4e6a82e8. HEAD matched the snapshot; no intervening diffs. All 14 records read in full, frontmatter through verse tails. Seven records earned a transform; seven reviewed unchanged.

What changed

  • LLG-0401-SCAS-ECHO.md: LLG-0400-SCAS (line 14) → [[lorelog/LLG-0400-SCAS|LLG-0400-SCAS]] — unambiguous record-ID mention; target confirmed via id: and existing relations. END-OF-EXPERIMENT (lines 51, 127) → code span — literal form designation.
  • LLG-0402-FSR.md: LLG-0400-SCAS (line 78) → wiki link, same confirmed target.
  • LLG-0403-WBA.md: Bricky's one-line deviation report (line 24) moved from inline italics into a > block — verbatim filing already introduced as quotation; wording, italics, and quotes preserved.
  • LLG-0404-DCP.md: LLG-0334-CSI and LLG-0339-SIRC (line 14) → wiki links — both IDs confirmed via id: and relations.
  • LLG-0405-DEV.md: code spans on document/form codes that are the record's subject — DEV-2026-0041, DEV-2026-0042, DEV-3A, DEV-4B, SOP-089, CA-7, CA-8 (lines 14–21, 35–37). Existing bold on DEV-3A and the CA-8 sentence retained around the spans.
  • LLG-0405-MEL.md: code spans on method-registry tokens — perform, escalate, document, reassure in the approved list (lines 19–22) and catalog excerpt (lines 68–71); ~~pause~~, ~~stop~~, ~~refuse~~ in the struck marginalia (lines 75–77); inline verb tokens stop (line 13, inside existing bold) and stop, cancel, refuse, document (lines 97–98). Proposed normalizations ("perform at a reduced rate", lines 26–28) left plain — they are phrasings, not registry tokens.
  • LLG-0405-SAC.md: (LLG-0400-SCAS) parenthetical (line 15) → wiki link; END-OF-EXPERIMENT (lines 21, 65) → code span, consistent with SCAS-ECHO treatment.
  • LLG-0408-AH1.md: END-OF-EXPERIMENT (line 82) → code span, consistent treatment of the same form designation.

Reviewed unchanged (successful reviews)

  • LLG-0402-GMP.md — Kindy's note is already a verbatim blockquote (lines 23–25); Form 51-E inside quoted material and Batch 7714-C (line 14) left plain per form-name precedent and doubt-leaves-plain rule.
  • LLG-0403-CWR.md — rituals already expressed as bold run-in list items (lines 36–46); classifications at lines 64–65 already bolded; no ID tokens in body.
  • LLG-0404-UPLC.md — incident list (lines 16–21) and Kindy's blockquoted note (lines 27–32) already express the structure; Compound 17-F is a name, not an identifier.
  • LLG-0406-FSD.md — already the most code-spanned record in the batch (lines 32–34, 44, 83, 105–109, 118). SA-SS-TEL (line 156) is a doctrine-node name with no canonical id: — left plain, noted here.
  • LLG-0407-SSP.md — thresholds already sectioned and listed; body references (SCAS, SAC, CNTR, UIS) carry no ID tokens, so wiki-link transform is out of scope.
  • LLG-0408-DTS-DEP.md — chronology already a bold-labelled list (lines 15–20); table conversion considered and declined — the run-in labels already express the timeline, and tabular transform is expected to be rare.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, tags, relations, titles, and the ## Related * aphorism/haiku/limerick tails — including two-space hard breaks and struck-through marginalia semantics.
  • LLG-0XXX: FeelingSeeder, But With a Different Hat (LLG-0406-FSD line 141) — a reserved placeholder, not a resolvable record.
  • Natural-language references without ID tokens (e.g. "see FSR", "the Dual-Certification Protocol", TNS) — out of scope for pass-2 slices.
  • SA-SS-TEL mentions — no canonical ID exists; left plain rather than hard-erroring the graph.

Verification performed

  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py: PASS after updating content/changelog.md Count and README totals.
  • BORIS_BIN=~/.local/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh: see PR body for exact outcome.
  • Compiled-article inspection of all seven changed records in dist/cantilever/: see PR body for exact pages and results.

Unresolved follow-up

  • None blocking. SA-SS-TEL (Synthetic Affect Successor Suite) is referenced as a doctrine node in at least four records (LLG-0406-FSD, LLG-0408-AH1, LLG-0409-PRE, LLG-0811-EG) but has no canonical record; a maintainer may want a real node someday. Not filed as a defect — unlinked states are valid archive conditions.