Presentation QA v2 — lorelog 09: 14 records reviewed, 7 changed
Maintenance ID: 0.1.00239.presentation-qa-v2-lorelog-09
Date: 2026-10-09
Scope: content/lorelog/ (LLG-0401-SCAS-ECHO through LLG-0408-DTS-DEP), content/changelog/
Second-pass ("rich structure") presentation review of the 14 lorelog records assigned by issue #943 at snapshot 4e6a82e8. HEAD matched the snapshot; no intervening diffs. All 14 records read in full, frontmatter through verse tails. Seven records earned a transform; seven reviewed unchanged.
What changed
LLG-0401-SCAS-ECHO.md:LLG-0400-SCAS(line 14) →[[lorelog/LLG-0400-SCAS|LLG-0400-SCAS]]— unambiguous record-ID mention; target confirmed viaid:and existingrelations.END-OF-EXPERIMENT(lines 51, 127) → code span — literal form designation.LLG-0402-FSR.md:LLG-0400-SCAS(line 78) → wiki link, same confirmed target.LLG-0403-WBA.md: Bricky's one-line deviation report (line 24) moved from inline italics into a>block — verbatim filing already introduced as quotation; wording, italics, and quotes preserved.LLG-0404-DCP.md:LLG-0334-CSIandLLG-0339-SIRC(line 14) → wiki links — both IDs confirmed viaid:andrelations.LLG-0405-DEV.md: code spans on document/form codes that are the record's subject —DEV-2026-0041,DEV-2026-0042,DEV-3A,DEV-4B,SOP-089,CA-7,CA-8(lines 14–21, 35–37). Existing bold onDEV-3Aand theCA-8sentence retained around the spans.LLG-0405-MEL.md: code spans on method-registry tokens —perform,escalate,document,reassurein the approved list (lines 19–22) and catalog excerpt (lines 68–71);~~pause~~,~~stop~~,~~refuse~~in the struck marginalia (lines 75–77); inline verb tokensstop(line 13, inside existing bold) andstop,cancel,refuse,document(lines 97–98). Proposed normalizations ("perform at a reduced rate", lines 26–28) left plain — they are phrasings, not registry tokens.LLG-0405-SAC.md:(LLG-0400-SCAS)parenthetical (line 15) → wiki link;END-OF-EXPERIMENT(lines 21, 65) → code span, consistent with SCAS-ECHO treatment.LLG-0408-AH1.md:END-OF-EXPERIMENT(line 82) → code span, consistent treatment of the same form designation.
Reviewed unchanged (successful reviews)
LLG-0402-GMP.md— Kindy's note is already a verbatim blockquote (lines 23–25);Form 51-Einside quoted material andBatch 7714-C(line 14) left plain per form-name precedent and doubt-leaves-plain rule.LLG-0403-CWR.md— rituals already expressed as bold run-in list items (lines 36–46); classifications at lines 64–65 already bolded; no ID tokens in body.LLG-0404-UPLC.md— incident list (lines 16–21) and Kindy's blockquoted note (lines 27–32) already express the structure;Compound 17-Fis a name, not an identifier.LLG-0406-FSD.md— already the most code-spanned record in the batch (lines 32–34, 44, 83, 105–109, 118).SA-SS-TEL(line 156) is a doctrine-node name with no canonicalid:— left plain, noted here.LLG-0407-SSP.md— thresholds already sectioned and listed; body references (SCAS, SAC, CNTR, UIS) carry no ID tokens, so wiki-link transform is out of scope.LLG-0408-DTS-DEP.md— chronology already a bold-labelled list (lines 15–20); table conversion considered and declined — the run-in labels already express the timeline, and tabular transform is expected to be rare.
What was deliberately left alone
- All frontmatter, canonical IDs, tags, relations, titles, and the
## Related *aphorism/haiku/limerick tails — including two-space hard breaks and struck-through marginalia semantics. LLG-0XXX: FeelingSeeder, But With a Different Hat(LLG-0406-FSD line 141) — a reserved placeholder, not a resolvable record.- Natural-language references without ID tokens (e.g. "see FSR", "the Dual-Certification Protocol", TNS) — out of scope for pass-2 slices.
SA-SS-TELmentions — no canonical ID exists; left plain rather than hard-erroring the graph.
Verification performed
python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py: PASS after updatingcontent/changelog.mdCount and README totals.BORIS_BIN=~/.local/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh: see PR body for exact outcome.- Compiled-article inspection of all seven changed records in
dist/cantilever/: see PR body for exact pages and results.
Unresolved follow-up
- None blocking.
SA-SS-TEL(Synthetic Affect Successor Suite) is referenced as a doctrine node in at least four records (LLG-0406-FSD, LLG-0408-AH1, LLG-0409-PRE, LLG-0811-EG) but has no canonical record; a maintainer may want a real node someday. Not filed as a defect — unlinked states are valid archive conditions.