Presentation QA v2 Pilot: Six-Record Transform-Family Slice

Maintenance ID: 0.1.00246.presentation-qa-v2-pilot Date: 2026-10-09 Scope: content/lorelog/ — the six records assigned by pilot issue #934 (LLG-0027-B.md, LLG-0051-E.md, LLG-IA-8C-DRIFT-01.md, LLG-0322-FTD.md, LLG-0453-MASCOT-CHARACTER-ARC-MAP.md, LLG-0323-ASD.md as the deliberate-no-change control)

What changed

  • Read all six assigned records in full, frontmatter through final verse tail, before editing. Branched from origin/main (04a5e20b).
  • LLG-0027-B.md: enumeration→list. The five-signature requirement at line 14 — "signatures from the original filer, their manager, a random COMA representative, and a SOMA liaison, plus an optional witness from the Lorelog staff" — split into a verbatim five-item list. Item text preserved word-for-word including the and/plus conjunctions and final period; lead-in gains only a colon, matching the merged lorelog-08 split convention.
  • LLG-IA-8C-DRIFT-01.md: identifier→code span. Twenty-three literal document codes wrapped — SIDR-8C/AFT/01 ×5, SDLR-8C/IIE/01 ×5, CSDR-8C/RCI/01 ×4, CSDR-8C/CTL/02 ×4, RIDX-8/CLUSTER/MA ×2, PPC-9 ×3 — matching the code-point convention merged in lorelog-13 against sibling record DRIFT-02.
  • LLG-0322-FTD.md: annex→<Details>. The ## Managed Absence Interpretation boilerplate annex (lines 23–25) wrapped as <Details summary="Managed Absence Interpretation" id="managed-absence-interpretation"> — summary reuses the existing heading verbatim, id reproduces the auto-derived anchor, matching the LLG-0811-EG precedent. The LLG-0324-MAP ID token inside the annex became [[lorelog/LLG-0324-MAP|LLG-0324-MAP]].
  • LLG-0453-MASCOT-CHARACTER-ARC-MAP.md: record mention→wiki link. All 56 inline record-ID mentions in the synthesis body became [[canonical-id|source-spelling]] links, labels preserving source spelling exactly, including the irregular targets LLG-IA-8C-ANNEX → lorelog/LLG-0008 and the compound LLG-IA-8C-ANNEX / DRIFT-01 / DRIFT-02 → lorelog/LLG-0008 / lorelog/LLG-IA-8C-DRIFT-0001 / lorelog/LLG-IA-8C-DRIFT-0002. Existing **bold** wrappers kept around the links. Field names breedingProgram (6×) and mascotRef (2×) and bare form codes SOMA-72/COMA-19 (3 sites) became code spans per the identifier transform.
  • LLG-0051-E.md and LLG-0323-ASD.md: reviewed unchanged — see below.

What was deliberately left alone

  • All frontmatter, canonical IDs, titles, status, tags, relations, {#...} heading anchors, existing emphasis, and every Related Aphorisms/Haikus/Limericks tail including stanza structure and two-space hard breaks. LLG-0453 line 175's breedingProgram sits in the aphorism tail and stays plain.
  • LLG-0051-E.md: the recursive 51-E chain is causal prose ("describing anxiety … counted as … which triggered"), not an enumeration of discrete items; a nested ordered list would require composing item text the record does not contain. "prepared, ambivalent, or unfit" (line 14) and "themselves, their team, or the archive at large" (line 12) are rhetorical triads, which the rubric excludes from the enumeration transform.
  • LLG-0323-ASD.md (control): single-paragraph record. "translated failures into administratively durable outcomes, defects into emerging structure, and unresolved conditions into deferred assurance states" is a rhetorical triad; no ID tokens, field fragments, quotation, or annex material exist. Earns nothing; unchanged.
  • LLG-IA-8C-DRIFT-01.md left plain: PPC-9 in the ## 5. heading (title context), Condition Log 7, Internal Correction Notice 4C, Procedural Update 4C Supersession, CLD-8C (designations used as names per the merged lorelog-13 convention), the metric acronyms RCI/APD/IIE/ICB, and page 10/Appendix F locators.
  • LLG-0453 left plain: Form 12-A, Form 88-B, Form 51-E/51-E (form designations used as titles), 404-AF (pattern name), Y/N (checkbox label), and the quoted "breeding program" phrase on line 100 (prose inside quotation, not the field token).
  • LLG-0322-FTD.md left plain: STCP/AAOA classification acronyms used as prose nouns.
  • No footnotes, tables, or <Aside> blocks earned. No new emphasis added.

Verification performed

  • BORIS_BIN=$HOME/.local/bin/boris ./bin/validate_graph.sh — passed: Boris graph diagnostics, full Cantilever compile (2,405 pages), verse residue check, 0 duplicate HTML IDs, Filed certification.
  • git diff on the four changed records confirms Markdown structure only — [[id|label]] wrappers, backtick code spans, - list markers, <Details>/</Details> tags. No word, order, ID, frontmatter, or verse changes.
  • Compiled-article inspection in dist/cantilever/lorelog/: LLG-0027-B.html renders the five-item <ul>; LLG-IA-8C-DRIFT-0001.html renders all 23 <code> spans; LLG-0322-FTD.html renders <details class="details"> carrying the preserved managed-absence-interpretation anchor with the annex paragraph inside and the LLG-0324-MAP link resolved to LLG-0324-MAP.html; LLG-0453-MASCOT-CHARACTER-ARC-MAP.html resolves every wiki link to a real .html href with zero literal [[ remaining.
  • python3 scripts/check_collection_counts.py — PASS after this docket; changelog trunk recounted (200), README totals updated (2,405 pages / 2,394 satellites).

Unresolved follow-up

  • LLG-0453-MASCOT-CHARACTER-ARC-MAP.md lines 91 and 116: **Defining Action**: carries the colon outside the bold where sibling labels (**First Appearance:**, **Voice:**, **Key Tension:**) keep it inside. Emphasis-boundary irregularity; left as written and flagged needs decision rather than normalized.
  • LLG-0322-FTD.md cites LLG-0324-MAP in-body but declares no relations edge; relations changes are out of scope for pass-2 slices. The wiki link now carries the reference in-body.